Aww, this is a really nice poem. I like your simplistic rhyming and good subject matter. The thing that I like is that even though the main majority of people that get made of like this will just sit down, shut up and mope, you write about it. I do these kinds of things all the time, venting all my anger into little stories. Very sweet, and touching. the beat is really nice!!
Courage doesn't always roar. Sometimes courage is the quiet voice at the end of the day saying, "I will try again tomorrow" -mary anne radmacher