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Hey, everyone! I'm VaiVedrai. I'm new to YSW and was introduced to it by my friend.

So a bit about me is that I'm new to writing. I hope that by posting here I'll get some good tips and feedback on my ideas and style. I think I might concentrate more on poems, but you never know. I'm very open to help, especially on how to form poems...I have thoughts in my head, but when I put it down on paper (well, usually a saved draft in my email) I don't know if it flows as I'd like it to. :)

And just a side note...my user-name is from the show Cirque du Soleil Alegria. It means "Go and you will see".

Thanks and I can't wait to start posting my work!
"Vai Vedrai che un sorriso Nasconde spesso un grand dolore. Vai Vedrai follia del uomo."

"Go and you'll see that a smile often hides a great sorrow. Go and you'll see the madness of mankind."

-Cirque du Soleil




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Haha! I love Cirque du Soleil! I thought your username sounded familiar!

Anyroad, welcome to YWS, Vai!

You'll defiantly get plenty of tips and helpful feedback on this site. And remember not to get discouraged from any tough reviews.

Well, what do you enjoy writing/reading? And I have to ask this, but what is your favourite Cirque show?

If you need any help or just want to chat, feel free to PM me!

Cheers,

Meadow
Purple light in the canyon
that is where I long to be
With my three good companions
just my rifle, pony and me

--- "My Rifle My Pony and Me"




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Hi there! Welcome, welcome ^^ I'm Heather and it's lovely to meet you. Poetry's fun and don't worry too much about formatting just now, it will come to you as you get more experienced.Read the reviews you get carefully and if you're wondering why they suggested a line break in a certain place or why they think you should or shouldn't have a capital somewhere, send them a pm and ask why. Members here are really friendly and they'll always be willing to help you out ^^ Speaking of which, feel free to send a pm my way when you've posted something and I'll see if I can give you a few tips.

See you around!

Heather xx
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Hi Vai, welcome to YWS! I'm Sarah. I've never been to Cirque du Soleil but I've seen it on television. It's really incredible to watch. So I'm gonna ask you some questions :)

What's your favorite color?
What's your favorite smell?
What's your favorite subject?
What do you like to write about?

PM me if you have any questions or want to talk.

~peanut~
There is a light in you, a Vision in the making with sorrow enough to extinguish the stars. I can help you.
~And The Light Fades


The people down here are our zombies, who should be dead or not exist but do.
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Hi! I can already tell that you guys at YWS are really inviting!

To answer a few of your questions...

Meadow: I haven't actually seen any Cirque shows. However, I've seen informational things on them from the Travel Channel, listened to their music, and have seen clips on YouTube. Every time they bring a show near me I'm either busy or the tickets are too much. :(

Heather: Thanks for the tips! I'll probably be posting a poem later tonight.

Peanut:
What's your favorite color? Orange and red
What's your favorite smell? I'm not sure! Probably baking bread or this sun-dried raspberry body mist I had. Haha :)
What's your favorite subject? In school? History and government.
What do you like to write about? My life. Not in a conceited way...more of a here's what I'm feeling so I'm going to try and describe it.
"Vai Vedrai che un sorriso Nasconde spesso un grand dolore. Vai Vedrai follia del uomo."

"Go and you'll see that a smile often hides a great sorrow. Go and you'll see the madness of mankind."

-Cirque du Soleil




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Oh, a government specialist. I love the smell of baking bread.




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Sun-dried raspberry body mist? Goodness, that sounds amazing. :P Welcome to YWS, VaiVedrai! I'm WD and it's great to meet you! You say you like history and government, so have you ever tried Historical Fiction? We have some great historical fiction writers on here! So happy to see you around! Hope you have a great time learning the site and getting to know everyne! :D If you have any questions or just want to talk, feel free to PM me!
~ WD
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Hey there!

Welcome :) and I too, enjoy the smell of baking bread :)
Mmm..

Anyway!
Have fun here!
Ben.



"Beneath this mask, there is more than flesh. Beneath this mask, there is an idea, Mr. Creedy, and ideas are bulletproof."
— V for Vendetta