Bionic Girl

I think it could be better but I do kinda like this one. I got the drawing diagrams from 'The Monster book of Manga' but the additions like the features I drew. Please tell me if you have any critism!

The drawing is nice...firstly, the shading is nice especcially the one at the chains. As well, that the expression of her face is nice. As well, the hair or the dreadlocks is much detailed.

Comments:

Body: the neck seemed out of proportion and her right hand seemed to merge with the hair.

Hello sacrifice!

Firstly, I love the mix of character in this sketch. You may not have deliberately meant it, but the way the hairstyle varies on her head shows a seperation to your character - or a mixed personality. It's mysterious and intriguing to be opened up to the art with that thought.

In the drawing itself, I think you've captured the body features exceptionally. My favourite thought is of the way you've shaped her arm and defined the tones of her shape. The joint from elbow to hand is cartoony but at the same time realistic, creating a form of surrealistic feature - which I adore!

Your character seems to have a sense of authority, but at the same time a little timid. I love how she has the whip - which might also be showing an infliction of self hurt, but I don't see it like this - and closed eyes. The whip tells you she's in charge and the closed eyes show a relaxed and timid figure, you could almost fall in love with this! It's stunning!

A little nitpick though...
I don't mean to sound really picky, rude or harsh but I think the development of her other arm that trails behind her head is a little lacking of feature and tone. It seems a bit too 'off' the rest of the character.

Overall I can see a great drawing that I think shows a very creative character and it's something that's not only very pleasing to look at and admire, but it really makes you want to write about her!

Stunning!

Ben.

Hello, I am AspiringAuthorA..M. and shall be your reviewer tonight. Please know that it is very late for me, almost a new day in fact.

OK< I found the X's over the nipples to be kind of creepy. Along with the rest of the drawing. But, don't mind me.

As far as the drawing goes, try focusing on where the stands of hair begin to end. They seem rather stringy at the tips, like just pencil lines. It gives the whole drawing an unfinished look.

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AspiringAuthorA..M. wrote:Hello, I am AspiringAuthorA..M. and shall be your reviewer tonight. Please know that it is very late for me, almost a new day in fact.

OK< I found the X's over the nipples to be kind of creepy. Along with the rest of the drawing. But, don't mind me.

As far as the drawing goes, try focusing on where the stands of hair begin to end. They seem rather stringy at the tips, like just pencil lines. It gives the whole drawing an unfinished look.

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Aspiring, I don't think this review will be very useful. This user was banned for plagiarism.