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Nadia

She bumped into the new girl, her sketch fluttering to the ground.

"Did you sketch me with your lead filled device?" she asked.

Nadia blushed furiously and accidentally dropped the rest of her sketches. She scrambled to gather them, the new girl picked one up and looked at it curiously.

"Ya, I drew you, and Ever and Mrs. Fowler. You have a problem with that?" Nadia muttered as neither of the girls bothered to help her collect her papers.
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Raptor saw a girl couched down and fumbling to pick up her papers. Raptor, being the gentleman that he is helped her gather them. He handed the papers to her.

"Thank you," she whispered.

"Raptor!" the other girls said.

"Why didn't you help her?" Raptor demanded.

And was it him or was that a new girl? He hadn't seen her around before, and he had the best vision in school. At least after his brother Hawkeye left after graduating. Raptor waited for the girls to reply.

The girl that had dropped her papers walked away.
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Vera~~

Vera blinked then attempted to hold in a hysterical laugh, the Raptor was standing in front of her. A legend was talking to her and the others were just acting like it was normal, except for the random stalker fangirl stares that were ever so about.

Suddenly the ground shook, shaking everything and the papers in our hands were thrown into the air. You could hear the speaker system just barely over the rumbling.

"Students...bzt..apparently...bzttt...giant black hole.....multi demensional pull...in the center city..."
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Smokey stopped in front of his Masters secret lab. Something was happening in the city. He could hear some sort of whooshing sound, and it sounded like it was sucking things. No, he couldn't just feel it, he could feel it. Individula leafs on trees were bending toward the city. Some came free of the tree and floated toward the strange wind like sound.

Above his heads the clouds were a pitch black. Smokey was no Meteorologist, but he knew those were not regular storm clouds. He put in the pass-code to speak with his Master and waited.

A series of beeps came out of the tiny all weather proof speaker by the pass-code pad. "Smokey, come on in," said a voice.

Smokey couldn't help but feel intimidated as the air sealed doors opened. The Master had a terrifying voice. Nobody questioned his authority, for there was nobody left except him to test it.
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Sadlis

Having been caught up in traffic, Sadlis arrived at school sickeningly late, missing his entire first class. He wandered into the corridor, trying to take in everything that was going on. This was one time when Earth seemed to be as busy as where he'd come from - when school children were moving between classes. A group of them were gathered around one girl, helping her pick up her papers.

All their work was in vain, however, because moments later the whole school seemed to try to shake itself apart. Books and papers were torn from the hands of students and whirled through the air as the entire building quivered, causing several people to stumble or fall.

The whole thing seemed, well, worryingly familiar. Oh, please don't let it be...

"Students...bzt..apparently...bzttt...giant black hole.....multi demensional pull...in the center city..."

Sadlis was torn between panic and outrage. This wasn't fair, he enjoyed it on Earth! Worse still, his ship was on the other side of the city centre, which didn't exactly help his chances of survival. The announcement repeated itself over and over again in his mind. "A black hole." He said, half to himself, "Oh, how could I possibly deal with that?"
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Ever

Ever couldn't believe this, the new girl, Vera apparently, was straight out of the 90's. Ever was going to help Nadia with her papers, but Raptor had beat her to it. Then she heard the message. A black hole? Wow, this is weird.

Ever turned to Clarice, "Do you know what that has to do with us? Raptor do you know?"
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Raptor shook his head. "All I know is that... this isn't natural." Raptor gritted his teeth. "People shouldn't be able to mess with time. Changing the past and future is... dangerous."

"I know but-" a girl began before a floating backpack hit her on the side of the head.

In one lightning quick movement Raptor caught her before she hit the floor.
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Vera~~

Soon as the school began to crumble people started running, jumping and even crawling out of the school.

"We need to stop it before it completely screws up the future!" Vera shouted over to Raptor, Ever, Nadia and Clarice.

"You mean I need to stop it?" Raptor asked, taking on the hero role.

"Just trust me I might know a bit more about intergallatic time warping black holes than you thankyou," Vera's serious side was now showing to the group "But where is the root source?"

"It's near central bank and the corporate belt," Clarice said quietly as they kept running.

They were the only ones running towards it but soon a blueish guy joined them. This was becoming a strange day and that said alot...
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"Whoa!" Raptor said dodging out of the way of a rolling car. The suction power of the black hole became immensely more powerful the closer he got to it. "Help me!" A young man said clinging to a pole. His body and feet were hanging in mid air being pulled toward the black hole.

Raptor seemed to be the only one resistant to the supernatural suction. "Hang on!" Raptor said dashing toward the man.

The man seemed to sob as he stopped next to him and carried him toward a store. Raptor walked in the door less building and set the man down. "Thank you, thank you!" the man said before running to the back of the store were other people were huddled. Items were being knocked over from shelves, threatening to fly out the store.

"Stay where you are!" raptor said before sprinting out into the street.

"Holy-" Raptor began to say before an eighteen-wheeler crashed down next to him. It's metal trailer scrunched on the road. A sliding truck bashed into the side. Raptor jumped atop the overturned eighteen-wheeler and looked around.

He gasped, everything was complete chaos. Cars and people were rolling across the ground like ships on a stormy sea. He cringed as a small station wagon was crushed by a tumbling fire truck.
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Nadia

After running off with her papers a strange boy had helped her collect the school began to rumble, shaking as the open locker doors clattered and swung around.

"Oh shi--" she said, thrown back against the locker.

The speaker buzzed out a few words Nadia could hear over the rattle of the school. A group ran past them, the new girl in slight advance on the others with a determined look on her face. Nadia shoved her papers into her backpack and ran after them as quickly as she could. Chaos reigns outside, cars being pulled apart as if invisible hands were ripping paper. The boy that had helped her earlier ran to pull a struggling man and the new girl ran ahead. Nadia turned and kick started her scooter, it roared as she pulled up beside the new girl.

"What are you doing? The pull is in that direction." she shouted.

"I'm going to stop it." the girl shouted back.

Nadia scrunched up her nose and grimaced before pulling the girl onto the back of her scooter.

"Let's get going then." she said and hit the gas.

"Thank you..."

"Nadia." she finished.

"Vera." the girl nodded as they raced towards the city center,
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Deus


"Students...bzt..apparently...bzttt...giant black hole.....multi demensional pull...in the center city..."

Deus head snapped up as he heard the announcement. He had been trying desperately to figure out how to finish the genius level equations in front of him, when he heard it. He blinked momentarily and then rushed outside.

This couldn't be possible! Okay, theoretically speaking yes it could, but Deus didn't want it to happen! Not when he was so close to being the evil mastermind his father wanted him to be!

It was only after he ran outside he realised he had forgot his bag. He sighed out loud and shrugged. His bag couldn't help him when there was a multi-dimensional black hole on the rampage.

Noticing a lone car in the parking lot he sidled over to it and tested the handle. Unlocked! He smiled to himself and slipped in. Then using, what he thought was, a long since forgotten skill he hot-wired the car. It was like learning how to ride a bike - you never really forgot.

The car hummed to life and Deus drove off. He had learned to drive when he was three, ah, the positives of being a mastermind and an evil one at that. Deus was heading to the city centre.
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Some people, Raptor thought as a car zoomed past in front of him. Wait, how come the car wasn't being tossed around like all the others?

He didn't have time to think because a stop sign was flying toward him. He ducked and watched as it was sucked into the black hole.

"Have fun in the nineties," he mumbled as he approached the black hole. He stopped in place.

Wait, am I going to go in there? Is that what my friends at the school wanted me to do do? And.. is that what they planned to do too? What if we can't come back?
He took in a deep breath, staring at the black vortex. It roared like a tornado.
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Ever

She started running with the others, but she soon was lost towards the back, she saw Vera end up on the back of Nadia's scooter, and she saw Raptor walk toward the blackhole.

"Wait!" She screamed, but she guessed that he couldn't hear her. She had no idea where Clarice was or where Nadia and Vera went. She was alone for now, in the midst of the chaos.

She heard a creaking noise behind her, she turned and saw a car moving toward her, she stood frozen to the groud, she tried to tell her leags to move but they wouldn't respond. She was a deer caught in the headlights.
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Nadia

Hearing a yell, she scooted her scooter to a stop, jerking the vehicle around. Ever stood frozen in the path of a car being sucked into the swirling void.

"Ever! Move!" they shouted, but the girl stood frozen in it's path.

Nadia revved her scooter and zoomed towards Ever as the pull on the car got stronger. She and Vera wrapped their free arms around Ever and yanked her along with them.

"Stupid girl." Nadia cussed as her arm strained.

They stopped once they were out of the way and Ever looked shaken. Nadia would of yelled but she felt a twinge of sympathy for the girl.

"Can I come with you guys?" she said wearily.

"I don't know how much weight my scooter can take." Nadia responded.

Vera grimaced. "Well, I need all the help I can get."

Sighing, Nadia got onto her scooter. "Get on then."
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Sadlis

Seeing one of the small knots of youths darting off towards the black hole, Sadlis realised that these people actually intended to do something about it. He heard one girl, moments before she hopped on a scooter with another, saying something about a knowledge of time warps and black holes.

And he himself knew a thing or two about space and black holes - maybe he could do his own part in helping! In any case, it'll be easier than just trying to get back to my ship. He thought.

The scooter, now with a third girl on it, made for the city centre, but Sadlis still had his car. It wasn't exactly his ship, but at least it would stand a better chance of not getting sucked straight into the hole than a human car.

He took little care following the path of the others, merely ducking a time or two as debris was hurled past him. A bike spun into the passenger side of the car with a loud crash, spraying glass over him.

When he finally pulled over, it was beside a boy simply staring into the deepest blackness imaginable, darker than the furthest reaches of space. And no sooner was Sadlis out of the car that it was being pulled, piece by piece, into the black hole. The boy seemed poised to step forward, to throw himself into the vortex along with everything else, as though that might somehow stop it.

Sadlis, knowing better, grabbed his shoulder. "What're you doing?" He shouted above the howl of air disappearing into the darkness. "You can't just walk in there and expect it to be stopped! You'll just get squished. We need to reverse what it's doing somehow."

**I might not be able to post tomorrow, and after that, I probably won't be able to post for a day or two, since I'm flying home tomorrow afternoon.**
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