Hi Kristyn, Pink here. Welcome to YWS, I hope you like it here as much as the rest of us! Okay, first of all, maybe you should re-size the picture so it's easier for us to view it. Alright, you have a very interesting picture here, I like it a lot. The picture has a light feeling to it. Like one of those paintings that you can stare at forever. My advice to you would be to add some shading, try to 3D it out a little bit so we can see some depth. Also, the clock seems to be just a place holder or something, if I were you I would get rid of it-unless it means something. My favorite part about this would be how you created the different seasons in each of the little window frame things. That was cool. Anyways, wonderful job. Keep it up!
~Pink
There are three rules for writing a novel. Unfortunately, no one knows what they are. -W. Somerset Maugham
Hey Kristin. First, welcome to YWS! I would like to point out that you have 2 posts and 0 reviews, and here on YWS, we have a 3:1 ratio. This means that you should write three reviews for every literary work you post. Anyway, onto to the review.
You should re-size your photos before you post them; its annoying when a reviewer has to scroll down to see the whole picture. The clock is cute, but I think the paper was too big and I think that the date and your initials are a little distracting, and i think you could have added some background to the paper. The fact is that there is nothing really interesting about this picture, nothing that makes it memorable. Happy Drawing. PM me if you have questions.
All our dreams can come true — if we have the courage to pursue them. -- Walt Disney
How creative! I love the different season to a windowframe idea. Really cute. I also love the rough sketch style, though watch your lines. Don't make them too crooked. It could use a bit of shading; I think this would look great if it were digitally colored in.
Not bad. Keep drawing.
June
"I'd steal somebody's purse if I could google it and then download it." -- Firestarter
First of all, you should re-size your pictures before you post them.
It's very annoying to wait for the picture to load, then scroll to look at the picture.
The date and your initials were sort of distracting.
Keep drawing.
-Manda
xxx
"All that is gold does not glitter, Not all those who wander are lost; The old that is strong does not wither, Deep roots are not reached by the frost." ~J. R. R. Tolkien, The Fellowship of the Ring
