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It's a pretty good picture -- you did a nice job with making the face turn. Something to work on might be the sketchiness of the lines. In pencil, they're fine, but usually when you ink the drawing, you do so in smooth strokes. You already know where the pen is going to go. Also, I think you'd see a bit of his other eye through the spaces between the bangs.
Pretty good for an angry sketch -- I was expecting a bunch of angry scribbles or doodles. Not an actual portrait.
To be frank, that was really a cool work.. I would suggest you to draw it light and i could see only one eye As it's the first time, never mind. So apart from these your work is cool.. You have done a great job.. Keep drawing !
I'm not much a fan of it, but I kinda like your work. 'Kinda' because it needs more color, more style, more etchy sketchies in the side. I also like your title, it really fits the whole prospect of the work. The size also matters on the album, so try enlarging it. It's quite small actually. And try to enhance the photo using Photoshop to bring it out more. You're one of the best sketchers I've seen here at YWS, so keep sketching!
You're etchy writey, Al
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As it's the first time, never mind. 
