Blink

I entered this into a short story contest (haven't heard the results yet). I still would like some criticism though so I can use it for something else if the contest doesn't work out. Hope you have as much fun reading it as I did writing it!


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Sorry, I thought I'd delete this because it got third place in the contest and I don't know if I'm allowed to keep the story on. Thanks for understanding!

Very good story!:) I like it, it kind of reminds me of Alice in Wonderland when Alice woke up at the end of the book. (That's a good thing).
It's written very well, I love how she get's worried when she is about to start playing the violin and how she is worried that her dress is to tight on her stomach. Very realistic.