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here is a drawing of my own silent hill. need helpful advice ^_^
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O_O

Um, sorry, really no helpful advice to offer, but ZOMG, the colors! The lighting! The angles!

It's not entirely realistic and some of the angles look a little wonky, but that just adds to the whole charm of the piece in my opinion. It looks like a stained glass window or a paper cutout. I love it.

I'm assuming there is a story behind this piece. Was it a literal nightmare you had? I wish my dreams had visuals like this...
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it is well based from a fanfic of mine ^_^ this is the 'other' version of the main character who is an impostor
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Whoa. :shock: That was a little scary...in fact, I'm creeped out now....

However, very haunting! The color choices were really powerful and I think it would be obvious, even without the title, that this could most definitely be a nightmare. ;)

The angles of the wall lines/roof thingies are intriguing. Where'd you get the idea for this, anyway?

Just one little pointer--the 'blood' (that's what it is, right?) spattered on the floor, I think it could look a little more realistic. Particularly in that right-hand section.

Anyway, chilling, creepy, ominous, all those good words, all at the same time! :D Nice job. I hope to see more of your work soon!
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well. I used a photo of a decaying old attic for inspiration. and the blood ^_^, yeah...about that... I need to work on blood and such
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here's another photo this time just with meh pen ^_^
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I have to say! My favorite part about it was the attic boarding and stuff. Not quite sure what you did, but I love the grainy feel of the wood. It just looks really neat and surreal. The window doesn't look like a window though, really. At first, I thought it was a picture canvas.

The girl is all right. The blood looks more like a carpet stain on wood, which is really amusing!

The girls... their bodies look really weird, as if they can't figure out whether they're guys or not. It's probably their faces. They don't look very feminine.
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