Mo's Marvellous Reviews!

Hey Mo! I was wondering if you would critique something in Fantasy Fiction.
The link is in my signature and it's called Luna.
Uhhh....and it would be helpful if you read the first chapter as well as the second, but I only want a review on the second. (Although I wouldn't mind if you did both.)
Please?
-Danie

Sure! I'll get right on it.

Done, and done. Anyone else?

Hello Mo.!

I don't know if you'll hesitate about this but my need of a review is for Non-Fiction.
Here's the link: topic57293.html

What's it about?
Well it's an extract from my column-based book Earth & It's Contents. The book's me ranting about my opinions of the least irratating things in the world on a nonsense backed up argument that's hopefully humourus.

This particular extract is on Indian Food.

Hope you enjoy it!
Ben.

Done. Anyone else?

Hey mo, it's me again Thanks so much for your reviews, I've taken on board all that you've said and have went back and re-written my previous chapters. I've also posted up chapter 8. Hope you can take a look at it when you can and give me your opinion on the improvements that I've made on the other chapters. Thanks so much x

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic56650.html chapter 8

*coco

Hi coco! I'd be delighted too! I've already read it (good job by the way), but I have to get off the computer now. I'll write your review in the morning.

Sorry for the wait coco, I forgot about that... -.- But it's done now, I really liked it.

Anyone else want a review?

Hey mo! Coco here again, hope your well I've finally posted up chapter 10 for you to look at when your not busy.
Thanks a million
*coco

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic59246.html chapter 10.

Done. 'Twas nice coco.

Anyone else that would like a review?

Hi Mo. Can you review this please?

Evil Knows No Limits

It's historical fiction, but I'm not bothered about the historical part! Tear it apart if you want, I don't mind.

Thanks,

JSPike

Done. SOrry it took me so long to get to you, but it's done now.

Okay, any else want a review? I don't bite, and I promise I'll check A LOT more often, so you wont have to wait.

Hi I want a review for my story. Here's the link:A Criminal's Heart

Hey there shubhiloves2write, I'm so sorry I haven't gotten to your story yet, and I don't think I will review it, seeing as it already has so many - I'd just be repeating what everybody else has already said.

Sorry.

PM me if you really want me to review, and I will, but at the moment, you've already gotten so many, that it seems my review wouldn't really be anything new to you.

Anyway, good luck, and keep writing.





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On a new note, would anyone else like a review? =]