The Inferno

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confuse...? Are you confuse on the setting or how the plot goes...is that it? Well just to clear something...we will start first at the lowest level on the mountain and we will start climbing up after we came face to face with the primitives...

from that when we reached the second level...we will meet the Innocents who at first think of our characters as people who are lost and begins to lead us to the upper levels in which they 'belong'. I am sorry for the confusion.

Schera

I opened my eyes and felt an armor of bones shielding around me like an armor. I fell slowly to the ground and gazed at a small pool underneath me. It took me time to relaize what was i looking or whether i was fully awake or not but when i place my left arm on my eyes, i realized finally what i was looking. My corner of my face, my left arm and part of me were total bones wrapped around by a thin fragment of skin. I do not whether to scream or not but when i looked up i saw people moving around me.

Their eyes were like mad dogs and saliva dribbled from their mouth. It took me time to realized that around me where corpses of their own kin. I stood up slowly and move away. They looked at me for a moment but their attention were towards the fallen kin in which they began to feast on their remains.

Such horror had i experienced, that i fled on this landscape covered by bones and a waterfall at the top of a cliff that i soon became exhausted. From that on, i heard a person talking. I peered through a large cliff where i saw a girl being defended by a boy.
I walked towards them covering my left arm with my right.
"Do you where are we?"
John McClane: Drop it. It's the police.
Tony: You won't hurt me.
John McClane: Oh, yeah? Why not?
Tony: Because you're a policeman. There are rules for policemen.
John McClane: Yeah. That's what my captain keeps telling me




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I was a bit confused on the setting. (sorry Foxfire I hope I didn't offend you, please forgive) and good luck on your exams! (if you haven't done them already)
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Mikael

I woke up, a bitter taste in my mouth. Well obviously im not dead then, i thought with a grin which was ironically befitting of a lion. I looked around a saw i was now lying in a pit of bones. What the hell is going? I thought confused. The last thing i remember was fighting in the pit. The snap of the ropes, the roar of the oponent, the smell of his blood as i opened him from chest to groin.

*sorry its short*
I have looked into the eye of the storm and stared it down. I am an adrenaline junky and i know no fear.



Perhaps it is better to wake up after all, even to suffer, rather than to remain a dupe to illusions all one's life.
— Kate Chopin, The Awakening