At the Edge of the World

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Hey Envy,

Thanks for your comments! All good points. This is, I should mention, a short story not a novel based on chapters or anything. I'm splitting it up into manageable portions because anything that's long sends readers here fleeing haha, generally speaking anyway.

Cheers!
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Hey Jiggity,

You're welcome! What you said makes sense. :) It reads more like a (short) story than a novel, I think. Now you can just ignore my comments on the abrupt ending. ;)
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