Anyone Need A Review??

Here is a really short story bit.

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Then here is a short story, like 1k words.
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They are both in action/adventure. Please review.

Logan.

Hello.

Can you please review this for me?

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post623303.html#p623303

There is a bit of shooting but not really violence.

All the best.

I'm really sorry about taking so long, but all those reviews are now done! Finally!

I don't think I'll be ready to do many more, so if you really need something to be reviewed, I'll try to get it done as quickly as possible. I'm leaving for holidays tomorrow until the fifth, but I might be able to print some off and read them on the way back or something and then type up the review later.

But only post if you don't mind possibly waiting a bit. School exams are coming up, so I will have some time off in the middle of January when I could do some reviewing. After that, however, I will be in second semester and most likely swamped with homework. So I'll probably be closing this from then until summer break.

So get your requests in ASAP, before I have to do that! I hope you all had an amazing Christmas and have a great new year! Bye bye for now!

~ Trish

I would love to have a review from you on my work, How difficult life could be

Have a look please!

chetan: Done!

Since it is still summer, I will be accepting requests until further notice! So, let's get requesting!

~ Trish

Woah - I read one of your reviews and it was incredibly in-depth and awesome.

If you're up for it, would you mind reviewing a novel I'm co-writing with my sister?

Reprisal Prologue and Chapter One. They are both very long and have really good reviews, I'm just looking more for some comments about the characters. Are they really too Mary-Sue-ish?

You absolutely don't have to review my novel, as it is fairly big

- Jai

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