Misfit Circus

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Hayden (formerly Haden): can control fire

I followed the kid called Viper in the direction of the music. I was a little nervous, which made me scared because when i was nervous, things started burning.
"Viper!" i called out.
"What?" he said hardly glancing back. He was being dragged by the arm by some girl. Personally if i was a girl i wouldn't be doing that. The guy kind of freaked me out. He looked like a freakin snake.

"Um. What would happen to me if i accidentally lit the camp on fire?" i asked nervously. I felt the heat starting to rise on my hands as the fire grew hotter.

"Mikael would probably beat you senseless." He answered as we reached the dance party. Whoever that Mikael was I'm scared already. I wonder around the dancers until i bump into something rock hard. Its some kid, man he felt like a brick.

"Hey, my names Mikael."
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((Okay... to get me caught up, just imagine that I posted to the extent that Viper has already talked to Hayden, then followed Mikael away, and is now curled up by the cooker, basking in its heat.))
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I was having a blast dancing at my so called dance party. But thing's changed pretty quickly, two new kids joined, one I think controlled fire and the other I wasn't quite sure. I decided to stop dancing and save Daemyn from his awkward dance moves. I grabbed his hand and led him away from the dancers. His response was usual by cussing and fighting, but this time he just cussed. I didn't mind his bitterness. I began to almost drag him with me as I walked to where Nick and Fee were. Both Nick and Fey were talking so I decided to join the conversation. I walked in with Daemyn holding my hand, it seemed as though Nick was throwing a tantrum, "He guys, whats all the fuss about?" Fee stopped talking and stared at me and Daemyns hands. Daemyn blushed which was very unusual for him.
Nick responded, "New kid seems weird" Fee chimed in,"The kids that controls weather"
whats wrong with him I thought. Daemyn spoke up, "Just leave him to me and Viper we'll take care of him." Fee got annoyed at him. I just grabbed Daemyn and walked out of the tent to yell at him.
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Sorry last post was Alura she influences people
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Em, ok, I'm a little confused. So Aulra showed up before I decided to get everyone from the dance party, yes? Anyway....

**FEE**

Once I got back to the party, there were a few people missing, but most of the circus was here. I found Markus, and asked him if I could stand on his shoulders. He gave me a weird look, but said yes. I pulled him over to the stereo where I turned off the music and had Markus lift me up on his shoulders. On the way up my body turned into bright blue cotton from touching his shirt.

"HEY!" I yelled to get the attention of the camp. Once I was sure I had every one's attention, I started my 'nightie-night' speech. "OK everyone, it's time to pack it up (the party, of course, NOT the camp!). Tomorrow, first thing, we're setting up the big tent! You all know what that means, tomorrow night we'll be performing." This was met by reluictant moans and shouts of joy. "Ok, thanks Markus. You can put me down now." He lifted me off his shoulders. I was still bright blue, which I think shocked him a little bit, but he covered it well. "Goodnight," I said to him, making my way off to the girl's tent.
Is he dancing with a little boy in spandex?!

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Kat

I pouted a little as I made my way to the tent. I had just gotten to the dance party and now it was over!

"Hey, ummm, where's my tent?" someone asked, tapping my shoulder.

I turned to see the new guy. "Oh it's right over there, opposite the girls' tent," I pointed out to him.

"Thanks," he mumbled. "Oh and hey, I never got your name, shapeshifter."

"It's Kat," I replied, folding my arms.

"Oh, well, I'm Markus," he said extending a hand. I glanced at it, before taking it.

"It was nice meeting you I guess," I said. He nodded. I grinned as I changed my form to match his.

He shook his head and laughed. "I've got to admit, that's a sweet talent."

I shrugged. "Eh, 'tis nothin'. Night."
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The scene where Alura and Fee talk on the hill has been erased. Gone
Last edited by PuffSammy on Tue Oct 13, 2009 1:30 am, edited 1 time in total.
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NO offense puff sammy but you're going way to fast. I am still waiting for a response from Mikael and the dance party and you're already going to bed. PLease slow down a little
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Nick, teleporter,

Once I managed to get all of the other boys into the tent, and finally laid down by the entrance, I couldn't sleep. I tossed and turned, but sleep just wouldn't take me. The memory of the look in Markus' eyes while he hit that car with lightning haunted me. It seemed as if he kind of enjoyed destruction.
Finally, I decided that I needed to do something. Forgetting that it was the middle of the night, I vanished and flashed back into existence outside of Sunnyside. I hadn't managed to look around inside the town before we'd found Markus. With any luck, I could explore and be back before Fey and anyone else noticed anything
And remember...A portkey can be any sort of harmless object...A football...or a dolphin.
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OK will do. Sorry first time writing a storybook kinda exited and want to go fast. :D
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Kili, control emotions,

I approach the new guy. His name is Markus, I think. He looks kind of withdrawn. I work my mind into his and am delighted to find that he has no defense whatsoever. I smile and turn his emotions towards extreme fatigue.

"You look tired," I say in a soothing voice.

He nods dreamily and turns towards the boy's tent. I have to work hard to keep from laughing. With any luck, the fatigue will last long enough to anger Fee.
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Hey, Hayden the controller of fire is a new guy too. You can talk to him if you want.
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Kili, controls emotions,

I turn my attention to the other newbie, Hayden. It takes me a minute, but I find him and walk over.

"Hi," I say sweetly.

He starts and turns, "Ahhh-Oh. Hi."

"My name's Kili," I say.

As he responds, I begin trying to twist his emotions. I find it harder to get into his mind than Markus', but I manage. Soon, he to is feeling completely wiped out. Oh, I hope this annoys Fee. And Nick, come to think of it.
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Wow, that was fast. thanks.
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Markus, weather;

I walk away from the girl feeling extremely tired. It's as if the entire world is settling on my shoulders. Nick is standing up, his body extremely tense.

"I thought I got everyone in," Nick says. He looks nervous, as if he is about to do something wrong.

"Sorry, I was talking to this girl," I reply.

"What girl?" Nick asks.

"Her name was Kili, I think," I reply, "But I'm extremely tired, so I'm going to sleep now."

"You better not be tired tomorrow," Nick jokes, "We've got lots of work to do."

I walk inside and find a place to lay down. Nick walks to the edge of the tent and then disappears. I think nothing of it, for sleep is already dominating my mind.
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