Reviews by Kamas, the Comma [Closed]

Hi everyone!
Critique's for everyone! One and all!

What I critique:

All poetry
(Narrative, Dramatic, Lyrics and Other)
Artwork and Photography
Other
(most things)


What I do not critique:

Long stories/novels
Lyrics
(most of the time)
Advance Critiques
Essays
Stories ( unless they're really short. Or you just want my opinion)

What I'd like you to tell me when requesting:

A link
The genre
Whether you are seeking a long detail critique or just a few suggestions.

One thing I ask you not to do:

Give me over 3 links at a time. Please. I will be less likely to review them.


Bring 'em on!

Kamas

EDIT!

Eh Whatever. Just give me anything.(Except long stories please, they're quite a torturous business)
I'll try to give you the best review I can.

-Kamas

Hello!!

was wondering if you could review this poem? Is Narrative poetry and the name is War Wind

viewtopic.php?t=53456

Thanks for the help

Hello! I have a short story for you to critique called Scarecrow


http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=53343
It's in other fiction; about fifteen hundred to two thousand words.

How do people do that cool thing where they write Here
and a url springs out of the word??

Done.

No one? Aw *broken heart*

Hey Kammie!!

me here, again.

could you plase check this out?
It's called Bye for Now.
post615795.html#p615795

Thanks so much for your help

Done Pudin

It would be really nice if you could give your comments on this one.Its in romantic fiction genre.

topic53783.html

Thanks.

Done Young.

I'm on a rollll.

I liked that! I am like blowed away by the talent you have. Its good that you can coptulvate the talent of writimg that way! Im currently working a piece to put here and I just got inspired by your work to contine my story. Thanks for the inspiration and keep up the good work!

I'm confused what did I do?

xD

Nothing? Quite disappointing.

Hi! So, I reviewed your piece, and was wondering if you would like to read mine, and add a couple of suggestions on characters, flow, etc.

It's called Luminescence, and is in eight parts, and still not finished! It is a Twilight fanfic, and I hope that that's OK!

Here is the link to part one:

Part One

So, yeah. Just what I suggested above really. If you really are wild about it, or need something to do, check out the next parts, and maybe even read the whole thing!

Thanks!

Mia x

Hi Kamas! I was wondering if you could review my 1st story for me. I'd quite like some more reviews on it (there are only 2 right now!)

So here is the link: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic54552.html
It's under FanFiction; and it doesn't matter what kind of review you give. I would prefer, however, to have a nice long review. This is my 1st story, after all!

OK, thank you so much! Bye for now! xD

Mia>> Done

Fruits>> It'll be done when I get back from swimming