Flyer: I really try not to be too harsh, but I can't even really bring myself to call this poetry, and I'm sure that you understand where I'm coming from. In the first place, lol isn't even a word! Right? =] In the second place, look at what you wrote in prose form: "lol is a word I like. I use it to say that you are funny." Is that interesting? Entertaining? Imaginative? Unique? Thoughtful? Picturesque? Descriptive? or even humorous? Keep in mind that I'm not pointing this review at your writing in general, and I certainly don't mean to be discouraging. But again, this really doesn't say anything, even as prose. If you ever want any advice, or a review of anything else of yours, please don't hesitate to ask. =) Good luck with your writing.
lol is a reaction I had when reading this poem because it was bad.
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I can't tell if this is a troll, or if you actually thought that making a short poem consisting of two emotionally bankrupt sentences would win acclaim. The topic is pretty unfulfilling- essentially a slang phrase with little or no depth- , and the whole effort feels so immature. I cannot believe you wrote this in more than five minutes. Give us more to chew on, and good day.
The woods are lovely, dark and deep. But I have promises to keep, And miles to go before I sleep, And miles to go before I sleep. - Robert Frost
alright I'm am going to be brutally honest. this in no was was anything close to the best poem i ever read. it is far to evident that you did not put any time into this and when it comes to writing, you need to be sure of your work. put some more time into this.
"The mark of your ignorance is the depth of your belief in injustice and tragedy. What the caterpillar calls the end of the world, the Master calls the butterfly." ~ Richard Bach
