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name: Gryk Monte
age: 19
gender: male
day-time occupation: assistant surgeon and undertaker
rouge talent: assasin...(he hides needles in his mouth to attack)
personality: Gryk is basically into bussiness...he likes nothing but to increase the number of clients and is jealous to other successful bussiness in which he assasinates. He works alone and due to this, he becomes a part narcissist.
habit: touches his throat to check the needle if its fine and safe.
Others: he needs someone to work with.
History: He was tortured and abuse as a child on a foreign town when the army came and killed his abusers. He was left with a gigantic scar at his back and front that almost look like that it is going to open. From this, he envies people with good bodies and starts his role as an assasin. Soon, he was an apprentice to a funeral where he found some things very similar to his body and was involved heavily on keeping up the bussiness.
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Overview of Character Profiles:

~Band of Small Time Thieves~
Krissy : Kamas
Maria : gsppcrocks10
Adamin : Chupatoasta
Natalie : wolf4

~Rogue's servants~
Jas : magnusbanefan13
Grayson : WhiteTiger93

~Unknown~
(If this is your character please state what "troop" they are part of)
Lorraine : pudin.junidf
Darcy : lizzifer
Gryk : foxfire


Sidenote : If no one wants their character to be the Rogue and die I will make a character for everyone to control at there will.
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When are we starting? I'm sorry, but I'm excited for it to start. :D
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If we're allowed to hae second characters, I'll take on the part of the Rogue. (:
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I'm with the Rogue. Can we make one more character?

I'm very extremely excited.
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i'm with the rogue...being a servant means money for gryk
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*Krissy's Friend*

Name: Dylan Knight

Age: 17

Gender: male

Appearance: Tall, dark brown hair, bright green eyes, he has a scar right above his eyebrow on his right eye

Day-time occupation: singer/ street performer

Rouge Talents: He's a trained fighter in mixed martial arts, he traveled Europe to find the masters to train with

Personality: He's kind of reserved, although he will speak his mind on certain topics.

Habits: He cleans his weapons constantly

Other: Up for love, but you have to earn him
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Okay I'm super glad everyone is excited to start!

Note: The Rogue... I suggest I create a very simple undetailed character profile that everyone can build one as the story unfolds. Do you guys like the sound of that? If not then tell me! If so well tell me too!

#2 Note: Everyone can create one more character. Minor ones though. I think Krissy does not need anymore friends and the Rogue has some pretty interesting characters as his servants. So stick with simple minor ones okay? Hope that it doesn't bother anyone.

#3 Note: Characters can be in love with other character That's fine as long as the other person agrees to it. I actually think it would be interesting to have a Rogue servant be in love with one of Krissy's friends make both of those character iffy on the side they are on. Those can be minor character people create. Just an idea to put out there that is up for grabs (or they could have a crush on someone in their group) If you have any ideas to share for the story...Share! I want to know! :)

Second Overview of Character Profiles:

~Band of Small Time Thieves~
Krissy : Kamas
Maria : gsppcrocks10
Adamin : Chupatoasta
Natalie : wolf4
Dylan : Teddybear22

~Rogue's servants~
Jas : magnusbanefan13
Grayson : WhiteTiger93
Lorraine : pudin.junidf
Gryk : foxfire

~Unknown~
(If this is your character please state what "troop" they are part of)
Darcy : lizzifer
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Here's my second, very minor character:

Name: Harry

Age:34

Gender: Male

Appearance: A heavyset man with piggy little eyes. His dirty blond hair is starting to thin, something that he is very sensitive about.

Day-time occupation: Castle Guard

Personality: He's greedy and all he thinks about is himself. He's probably the worst guard ever because he'll let anyone into the castle for a couple coins (he always blames the intruder on other guards, because no one ever suspects the fat guy). He's a coward and pretty pathetic.

Habits: Stroking his non existent mustache and sniffling whenever he's nervous

Other: If the Rogue wants to break into the castle, Harry's the guy to see. Same for Krissy and her friends - Harry's not picky about who he takes money from.
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Second character: an informant.

Name: Daniel Alistair Masen

Age:19

Gender: Male

Appearance: with darker hair though.
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Day-time occupation: works in a bar (medieval kind of bar, with beer everywhere and wooden tables and benches, with wooden doors that creak every time someone opens them.)

Rouge Talents: Fighter. He is one of the best there can be.

Personality: He is Lorraine's half brother and tha's why they don't share the same last name. He has alwyas been opposed to the lifestyle his sister has. He is very kind and honest, quite sometimes. He defends his believes above everything, and fights against anyone who dares say something opposite from what he believes. BUt as his half sister, he's an ambitious rat (sorry.lol) He adores money and that's why he works as an informant for both parties. He knows how his sister is and what she is capable of doing but he's not afraid of her. He's very sneaky and very good doing both of his jobs, informant and bar tender. Even though he might be a bit insentive sometimes, he is capable of loving passionately.

Habits: laughes crookedly.

Other: Up for love I think. If there's money in the game, be sure he is one of the best you get.

History: His mother was a rich woman who one day had an afair with this bar tender and eventually had a child with him. Now that being Daniel . His mother left him with his father while she went back to her husband and had another child, his siter. His father was very poor and that's why he sometimes has nothng to eat. But aagainst all odds he began working and making his own money unti he was fully independent. When he was fourteen his father revealed to him he had a sister. He didn't hate her, just quite envy her. Lorraine and Daniel started seeing each other now and then, but he lothes her perception of life. They both see each other and treat each other respectfully although they have their differences.
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**Minor character**

Name: Kara Leigh Ray

Age: 18

Gender: Female

Appearance:

Day-time occupation:

Rouge Talents:

Personality:

Habits:

Other: Up for love if it's allowed

History:

NOT DONE! She's an informant
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Name: Gregory "Griery" Nicholas Flemso, the Rouge, the King of the Underground Court.

Age: 32

Gender: male

Appearance: Slick, black cheek-length wavy hair. Muddy brown, permanently tired looking eyes. Thick stature. Scars from his fights and a particular one he got from the fight with the previous Rogue before subduing him.

Day-time occupation: Nothing. The Rogue remains the Rogue through day and night.

Rouge Talents: Griery is the darkest man out there, he sits in his throne taking large profits of everything the peasants own in exchange for their lives and the lives of their families. Murderer, thief and tyrant, he will stop at nothing to become the richest and most influential man in all of the Medieval Times

Personality: Cold, bitter, greedy and unmerciful, he has shut down every positive emotion in his system. It's next to impossible to actually tell want he is thinking.

Habits: Rubs his chin, as if he was deciding which bread to buy but continuously does it while deciding the life or death of a person who dared defy him.

Other: A long time ago, he love a woman, so much so that when se died she took his heart with her. Good luck getting his heart back.




Note: If this is too detail please tell me! We will soon be starting. I'll let you guys know on this thread when we start!
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**I'm going to make another faithful servant to the Rogue, but she is going to be completely, head over heels in love with him. She'll do anything to please him and if/when he dies, she will most certainly want to seek revenge. ^_^**

Name: Kayla Mills

Age: 24

Gender: Female

Day-time Occupation: A "club" singer. Not the clubs you might think about though. Anyway, she has a very beautiful voice.

Appearnce: She's 5'11'' with a curvy figure. She's seen as beautiful by many men, but she only has eyes for one. She has light, sky blue eyes and tanned skin. Her caramel brown hair is stick straight and falls to the middle of her back.

Personality: She's very faithful to the Rogue. She is in love with him and all she does, everything that she is, is because of him. She seems like a pretty fun loving girl. Though, once you get to know her, you'll realize she's very strong and capable of anything. If the Rogue asked her to kill a hundred people, she would do it for him without a second thought.

Other: She's not exactly up for love, as you can see.
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Okay! Storybook starts.....



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The Beginning:
*Note: I'm trying to get everyone that is in Krissy's group to share their life stories. Then we'll switch over to the Rogue's court where the Rogue can talk about himself and other people feel the need to share their life stories with each other. But meanwhile the people controlling Rogue servants can do narration scenes and some dialogue but check if what you do with someone's character is okay with that person.*



Krissy joined her friends in the damp grass and stared at the weakening fire crackle upwards to the stars.

“How are we gonna do this Ted?’ she whispered to the moon.

Her friends joined her in the grass, chatting quietly with each other. The camp had been set up in a small opening in the middle of the forest outside of Montagi. They had to be careful, *Bird ears where all over this forest. Krissy listened for the faintest crack of sticks and leaves, giving any evidence of a Bird. She knew they were safe here, but it never hurt to be prudent.

She turned half of her attention to the conversation that had been forming around the camp. They were discussing the simple, incomplete plan to bring down the Rogue that had been destroying their beloved Montagi. Krissy though of how amateur thieves like them could bring down the King of the Underground Court. This man had survived hundreds of fights to the death. He hadn’t just survived, he actually lived for this challenges, just for the chance to prove his strength. With a sigh, Krissy laid her head on her knees. She heard the careful footsteps of Maria approach her. Maria moved like a thief or the murderer that she was, Krissy was just so use to Maria’s silent approach.

“So Krissy, you are looking quite glum dearie,” whispered Maria, plopping down beside her.

“I’m just thinking about why we’re doin’ this is the first place Maria.” Said Krissy in a shushed tone.

“Well, I know why I am doing so dearie, but think for an instant, why do you want to kill this man. Why would this idea even occur to you?” responded Maria casually.

“He killed Ted and lil’ Emily, my only family” Krissy replied softly, her throat feeling raw.

“Now dearie, do not start crying on me, you’re a tough girl, a rogue to the bone. One of the best I have seen in a long time.”

“… But Lil’ Emily…she was just so small, a baby! Why kill a baby Maria? Why kill Ted, he ain’t done nothing. Neither of ‘em had. They just had blood relation with Pa. Oh how Griery hated Pa. Hated him with every inch of his heart, if he had one that is. I was lucky Maria; I would be dead like Ma, Pa, Ted, and Emily. I went to the market Maria, Griery didn’t know I existed. He just killed everyone in the old house, assumin’ that was it. I would be dead at 9 Maria.” Krissy choked out, a single tear rolling down her cheek.

“Oh dearie, but you are not dead. You are not dead because you are needed here. Now. You are going bring down that fool Griery. I know you will.” Maria pulled Krissy close and wrapped her arms around the younger girl.

During the conversation the others had joined them around the fire. They all sat, as comfortable as they could get on a log. They just listened to Krissy’s story, it was just one of the sad stories in this group. Each friend, still alive, still breathing had a good reason to kill this “King of the Underground Court”. Personal reasons they had shed very little light on, stories that didn’t have to do with their love of Montagi. Krissy wiped off the staining tear from her cheek.

“What’s everyone else’s story? We’re all like siblings but this ain’t a topic we’ve covered. Now that I’ve shared everyone else should too.” She said surely, all the tears in her voice had been swallowed down the pits of her heart and locked under key.

Everyone look at each other, not sure who should start.
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