[Open] octo's got some free time...

So, why am I doing this?

I have free time, finally!
I need to get on YWS more often.
I need to read more.
I would like to improve my critiquing.

My two requests

The maximum number of pages I'd critique in one sitting is seven. Siete. Bay. Nana. Even-say. Please don't ask for a request of a behemoth piece of writing. If you could, break it up into sections and I'll be happy to tackle it.

If you could, just let me know your thanks through a PM, or just come back to this thread and request another one! (Oh, as Nate says, only two requests a day. Just a reminder.)

I am not the master of grammar, but I know I'm pretty good. I am a stellar speller and I like to get down to the details.Otherwise, I will review anything and everything.
Fiction, non-fiction, poetry, prose, any genre, any rating. Here are some examples of how I review:
Prose
Poetry

Expect your reviews to be done within a day or two, unless I say otherwise.

Now, let's DO IT~

can you read my story? I am only getting one person to review it (the reviewer loves it).
It is fanfiction, but you don't have to know anything about it. Cause I am going to explain everything in later chapters.

I have two chapters

prologue +chapter 1= topic50817.html

chapter 2= topic50871.html



If you don't like chapter one you don't have to continue on.

Hey,

Would you mind reviewing my latest undertaking? My brother is the only one to have read it, and he's really not much help. It's technically a fan fiction, but it's from a nearly plotless game.

Super DodgeBrawl (Prologue and Chapter One)-- http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic50870.html

Super DodgeBrawl (Chapter Two)-- http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic50870.html

Any sort of advice would be greatly appreciated before I continued with this thinger.

Reviews have been finished for both Maki-chan and hen.hug! If anyone else wants a review, just drop a line here.

Hi there!

Could you review A Sailor at Heart?

Thanks!

- Fraggle

Finished within ten hours! xD Actually, I had to do other things today, so that's why. Would anyone else like a review?

Hi *waves*

I was wondering if you could review the first draft of my pride and joy, Black stone inn (working title)? ( its about 2k wrds)
Its a suspense/thriller,

here's the link: topic51203.html


thanks so much!

ButterFlyInk's review has been finished! Starting tomorrow until Sunday, expect slower responses. I have a volleyball camp to attend, so I won't be home much. If there are requests, I will get to them. Just don't expect same-day delivery

Do you do lyrics?
I'm going to pretend you said yes
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If you don't, you don't have to do it.

-Carly

I definitely do lyics! Sadly, I won't be able to attend to it until Monday. Volleyball camp is way more intense than I first expected! (I did nine suicides/ladders/running lines today, eight of them consecutively. I nearly cried.) I hope you won't mind the wait

Not a problem.
Wow. I do not miss volleyball one bit. Suicides stink! Good luck and have fun

-Carly

Review has been completed, finally! Now I'm back on regular schedule, so any requests will be fulfilled ASAP. Any takers?

Howdy, I'd much appreciate some more input on this:

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Thanks, you're the best!

(Mr_Bacon and I are signature buddies. Yay.)

The review has been finished My plate is currently clear.

Hello, sorry to bother you, but I have 3 poems in this thread, the first two are quite short. If that's too many, I understand.

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~ Roon