Untitled Chapter 32 part 4

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Here's the first draft! By first draft, I mean VERY first draft. It sucks. And trust me... it doesn't end like that. Really.
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That should be published!
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That was amazing! When you publish it, I will be buying it.
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...

What?

New version = 9999999999999999999999999999999999999999x better.

And Sadie > Melissa.

[though I may be biased - I don't like anything without Daniel.]

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JFW1415 wrote:New version = 9999999999999999999999999999999999999999x better.


Understatement of the year. It's sooooo bad! XD
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Awww. It's kinda sweet, though.




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Snoink wrote:
JFW1415 wrote:New version = 9999999999999999999999999999999999999999x better.


Understatement of the year. It's sooooo bad! XD

well duh. there's no daniel. add him and it'll be fine. ;-]

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