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I don't understand.

Each of us has already reviewed three things? What?
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Jen, Gal meant some of the "willing reviewers" may already have recieved requests since signing up.
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Fool
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PM me please with a link to where your work is posted

I will try to review everything asked of me in an detailed way as soon as possible, im honest with what i like and dont like as well as being fair with grammar and sentance structure
Last edited by Fool on Tue Oct 04, 2005 7:27 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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*cough* It's grammar. With an a. ;)

Add that to my comments - I'm a spelling/grammar freak.
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So it is, my mistake

I did say grammar though, not spelling
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Niteowl
Poetry
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I'm more technical (grammar, spelling, flow). I don't typically tear work apart at the seams. In fact, some might call me easy. But not too easy. I won't baby you.

Also please note: At least for another month or so, I will continue to have much more limited Net time than usual. So if you want to request a review right away, that's fine, but don't be shocked if I take a week or more to respond. Come November, it should take less time for me to reply.
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Dan Sanders
any prose as well as poetry
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I focus more on imagery, diction and other literary aspects of writing. I am not so concerned with things such as grammar and spelling, however, if it makes it difficult to read, I will correct it. And laugh at you. Just kidding bout the laughing.
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bubblewrapped
Poetry only - I dont have time for prose.
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Basically, I'm honest but I try not to be too blunt (unless I'm PMSing). I dont have much time so short poems are best, longer ones will take more time to get to and I may or may not get around to your request straight away, depending on what I have to do that day and how much time I have online. I'm not much for the technical aspects, except vocab and spelling - I am a spelling freak. Also rhythm is a biggie, and I'm liable to be hard on rhyming poems. No multiple reviews, OK? One per person per week (not that I'm likely to be that popular, but I seriously dont have time for more than that). Keep it simple.
Got a poem or short story you want me to critique?

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Ok, thanks Nox.

Forgot to mention. No lyrics, please!
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Griffinkeeper
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I specialize in Prologues (which I can't write bizarrely enough), story flow, plot lines, and a little grammar and spelling skills. Give me 48 hours, if you don't get a response in that time period, tell Snoink to poke me. Shouldn't be a problem though. ;)
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Writersdomain (Stev)
Preferably poetry
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I'll give constructive, honest and sometimes brutal critiques. I focus mostly on word choice, grammar and my pet peeve, spelling, but will go in-depth on some ideas if requested. I am willing to do occasional stories, but nothing too long 'cause I don't have that kind of time. I'll try to be as encouraging as possible, but I'm not going to lie to you. And yes, please, only one piece at a time from each person. :wink: :D
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Username: Nefer
Genre: Prose, Artwork, some poetry.
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Comments: I usually finish reviews within two-three days. I'm honest and add suggestions where it is needed. I also comment on dialogue, description and story lines.
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USERNAME: Athena
GENRE: Romance/Horror - I read all genres but these are my preferred (I only review stories sorry)
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COMMENTS: I don't know how long a review would take me since I'm still trying to balance college and work but depending on the length I'm reviewing it shouldn't take me too long. I'd try to finish them within forty-eight hours!




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