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Shall I officially close this storybook?

Yeah, close it.
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Couldn't we just postpone it until after summer?
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~Raven / Rebel / June 15th~

--9:57PM, Isaac Redwind’s apartment--

“Rock, paper, scissors, shoot! …Rock, paper, scissors, shoot! …Rock, paper—Oh, good, he’s waking up.”

A loud groan came from under the heavy sheet atop the couch, the mass moving slowly. I placed my index finger and thumb on my lips and whistled loudly. In an instant the blanket was flying off the couch.

“So, let’s try this again,” Dylan said. “Now that you’re all taped up, I won’t try to knock you unconscious. What side are you on?” After a muffled reply, he continued. “No side?”

Another muffled reply. I hung my head, hoping my hair would cover my expression. It was one of those, “Could I ever do anything so stupid?” moments; those silent, humiliating, stupid moments.

“Sorry ‘bout that,” Dylan said. The sound of duct tape peeling off of skin surrounded us. “Can’t be too cautious these days, can ya?”

“Cautious?” Isaac screamed. “That wasn’t cautious! That was… physical assault!”

A phone was picked up and Dylan said, cocking a gun, “I wouldn’t do that if I were you.”

A fist was slammed on the door from the outside. All heads turned to hear the visitor call, “Police! Open up!” Now, when two persons – or three – share the same enemy, it doesn’t matter if they also share hostile feelings. I wondered whether Isaac was going to run as I was picked up and rushed somewhere. I placed my hand out to glass and felt for a window lock. Opening the lock and window I climbed out onto the fire escape. But he wasn’t behind me.

“Come on you guys!” I said in a rushed whisper. “Hurry up!”

One came out and my hand raced to his head. Wrong hair.

“Dylan!”

“Look in my dresser for a note, Rae.”

“What? Hurry up!”

“My foot’s stuck. Find the note, or I’ll come back to haunt you!”

Isaac shut the window and pulled me down to the ground before I even had a chance to understand what he had said. Shouts came from above. “Dylan,” I said quietly, worriedly. We were, for some reason, hiding in a hedge.

Gunfire.

Four shots rang in my ears. I knew who they were aimed at; I knew who had been shot. If luck was with us, one of the lawmen had gone down too, but that wasn’t what I thought about. He was gone. I knew it. Those monsters had taken the one man I could ever love away from me!

“I’m gonna murder them!” I said through clenched teeth, attempting to storm my blind self out of the shrubbery. I struggled from Isaac’s grasp on my arms.

“I don’t know why I’m helping you since you just tried to kill me, but you can’t just barge in there!”

I paused and counted to ten. Not that it helped, I was still as mad as heck. I placed my hand on his arm and tried to look him in the eye as well as possible, tears starting to well up in my own.

“But they killed him.”

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Oh, my brain is so dead today. I apologize for such a corny, undetailed post.
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It has been far too long since anyone has posted. Things have reached the point in which I must ask if you think we should continue, or close this story. Please submit your thoughts/opinion in the poll above. On August 10th, I will decide if this book should be left to die based on the scores.

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Fifty points to anyone who posts. Please, I'm dying of boredom here!


~Raven / Rebel / June 19th~

Clothes were flying behind me, tossed out of the drawer. After searching gently for half an hour, I had lost my nerve and ending up just throwing things around. Finally, my eyes fell upon an envelope in the back corner with my name on it. I snatched it and tore it open without hesitating.

Such horrible cursive, I thought as I looked at it. Then I read it.

Raven,

I sure hope you're reading this after I'm gone, and not before. If it's before, darn you for snooping around my sock drawer.

So, I am no longer here. Don't cry, and don't hurt yourself again like you had when I met you. I want you to be happy. Go dating again. Find that guy who you would rant about in your sleep, he seems okay. Do find love again, do not become depressed. That's an order, sweet.

Sorry it's not longer, I'm not good with words.

Yours while I last,
Dylan




I paused a moment, tracing the big, loopy "D" with my finger. He wanted me to be happy-- I wanted me to be happy. Had I really talked about Spencer in my sleep? I hoped not.

Spencer. I had vowed that the next time we met, I'd make him miserable. He deserved it. But afterwards?

"After I ruin him, he'll never want to see me again." I said aloud. "And he could already be dead, or with someone else. It wouldn't matter."

That was what I told myself, over and over, as I packed my bags and looked him up in the White Pages.


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*for some reason, I want present tense for this*

~Kelly / Civilian / June 18th~

My eyes creep open to see white walls surrounding me. The bed I lie on is hard, and making it impossible for me to be comfortable. I turn my head to see a mirror. Probably a two-way window, I think. And one particular scent fills my nose: Interrogation Fluid, or Truth Serum. This is not good. I sit up and try to remember what happened. Behind the blur I recall running, someone chasing me, and the voices... Doubly not good.

Reaching for my pant pocket I run the number I familiarized myself with over in my mind. My hand closes over a cellular phone and I pull it out, pressing the buttons the while.

I hold it up to my ear and listen to the haunting ring and my own thoughts. Maybe I shouldn't call him, I think. Maybe I should call someone else.

Hello? The calm reply and his welcoming voice calmed me.

"Gary, I'm in trouble. Before you yell at me for bugging you and not the cops, it's not a normal kind of trouble," I say in a rushed whisper. There have to be cameras and recorders in the room. "A while ago some people ambushed me and knocked me out, and now I feel like I'm in an asylum, and I don't know where I am or what I did or anything. I'm scared and bruised and-- footsteps."

The door opens to reveal a young man with a scowl. "What are you doing with a phone? They were supposed to search you!" He comes over and pulls the phone from my hand. As I slink back into the corner he puts the phone on speaker and says,

"Track this phone and you're dead."

Pushing a few buttons he sets it down and it starts to beep. He grabs my arm and I scream, loudly, kicking and hitting until he just has to laugh at my weak attempts. Gary calls, "Hello? Kelly, what is happening?" The man sticks the needle of a syringe into my arm and squeezes fluids into me. My grip slackens. I cannot move. I cannot scream. All that is left is my consciousness, my heartbeat. The phone beeps faster as Gary talks, until it shuts itself off.

The man takes me from the room to a very disturbing table on wheels. He set me on it and rolls me to another room, my vision blurring. I want to fight back, but I cannot. Adrenaline pumps through every inch of me. What are they going to do?

The room is dark except for a few candles. I start to regain my vision and motion, but the man sets my arms and wrists in cuffs attached to the table and chains my body to it. I’m left alone for ages until another man, dressed entirely in black, enters.

“Welcome to Interrogation,” he says icely.

*Because he worded it so beautifully*
Bolt wrote: It was a small room, dark, cramped and wet, water leaked from above, making a tick like sound by the water. The small bits of light reflected of the puddles, making shadows dance around the room, reflecting the many menacing things. Around the room were strange things, body parts in jars, and animals stuffed on shelves, guns and knives hanging on the walls, and two people alive in the room.

One of them was hidden behind a large black cloak, but his figure was familiar. He walked around the room, muttering something, under his breath, anger was dripping off him with the water. The other was a girl, around eighteen, most likely, with brown hair, that was now tangled and messy scattered. Knots ran through it, and grease as well. Her eyes were filled with pain and fear, but also hope and a touch of bravery...she was Kelly.

Kelly was chained to an operating table, she didn't dare to scream, though it was obvious she wanted to, her mouth was clamped shut, and she looked like if a sound opened the man would kill her. She turned her head to see a man fingering a kitchen knife. which was dripping with water, that brought with as it fell, small bits of hardened blood. A tear made her way down her check, mixing in the water, that soaked her.

"I don't want to have to hurt you, Kelly," the man said, the voice sounded angry, but also calm and in pain, a weird combination, but yet his voice was all to familiar.... "So just give in. Tell me their weaknesses."

Kelly unsteadily shook her head, and the man came closer, the knife clenched tighter in his hand.

"I could kill you right here, right now," he said touching the knife to her throat, a small prick of blood came out. She cringed. "But how would that help me? Tell me how to beat them, unless you want to suffer."

"Who--who are y-you?" Kelly stumbled, and the blade was pressed harder on her throat, a few more drops came out. "Stop-"

"You're in no position to talk back. Tell me," the man cut in, anger had now taking his voice over now, more blood came out from the knifes position. "Or suffer the consequences."

Kelly winced, the man raised the knife, clutched it with both hand and looked at her, "Tell me," He yelled, and sent the blade down at her heart.

At that moment time seemed to slow, the blade slowly crept down to meet the target, Kelly's mind seemed to be racing, debating what to do.

Finally her mind seemed to have made its decision, time went back to normal. And just as the blade was about to touch skin, Kelly shouted "Okay! Okay, please! Wh-what do you want to know first?"
Religion without science is lame; science without religion is blind.

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oh my god.
i remember this !

wow, you guys have all imporoved in your writing so much.
great job tex and bolt(:

sorry i didn't post.
wayyy to busy.
miss you all <33

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