Young Writers Society

Ok, recently i started writing a story and am really getting flared about it but need a few more ideas, this seems like a way to gain that.

Basically Hitler won the war and from that created the whole Aryan race. However as the Aryans have bred, inbreeding has taken place to keep the blood 'pure' and Aryan. The inbreeding caused different genes to mix and now their hair is black and their eyes Lilac. Now there are also other civilization that lived in different places in the world, hidden until Hitler's death. You can create other civilizations for your character to come from but the idea is now all the characters live just outside Aryan territory, they can either be really racist again Aryan or the whole nice compassionate sort of person. Nevertheless war is starting, people are fighting, Aryan are strong, they have already beaten the world once, can they do it again?


So here's my character:

Name:Alex

Race: Ursine (bear)

Race Appearance (similar features for the whole race) : Brown hair, brown eyes

Personality : Sarcastic, not afraid to use violence, Funny, not the most clever, no strong drives for a better life in the future.

Beliefs : Just because a leader is bad it doesn't mean his race is. Feels strongly connected to Aryans.

History/defining querks : Was in love with an Aryan who he was split up with for the beginning of the war, still very bitter about the whole thing and becomes violent when it is brought up.

Ok, now it's your turn, no particular rules, as many characters as you want, Just have a go.

*I will post a profile for this tomorrow*

Name: Colonel Bruno Uutenburg

Race: Aryan, although he wishes he weren't

Race Appearance (similar features for the whole race) : Blonde hair, blue eyes

Personality : Bitter, drinks a lot. Has idea's about rebellion but is 53 years old and doesn't know anyone else who would help, so he thinks he's pretty much useless and gets drunk everyday. Incredibly cynical toward post-war Germany.

Beliefs : The Aryans are a make-believe race of people who evolved through genocide. He feels shame toward the way he is, looks, and what he's supposed to stand for.

History/defining quirks : He was a Colonel for the opposite side on Germany, the T.R.R. (Third-Reich Resistance). When Aryans brutally murdered everyone in his bunker and the barrel was pointed at him, he cracked under the pressure. They gave him the option of surrendering and embracing his true Aryan, seeing as he was blonde and blue eyed. The Aryan army requires at least two years of service before you can retire to lead a normal life in their "utopia" and it was during these two years that the colonel had to force himself to kill hundreds of innocent people he did not want to kill. When therapy helped him through a dark, suicidal period, he turned to drinking and hangs around one bar called Happy's. In his younger days he wanted to rebel and created about fifty genius stratagems, hoping one day someone else would join up with him to create an armed rebel militia. Alas, it never happened, so now he drowns his sorrows in booze. However, I'm sure if someone were to approach him with a similar attitude, someone younger, worthy of apprenticeship, he wouldn't be too reluctant to give away his secrets...

Name:Bray

Race: Half Aryan, Half unknown

Race Appearance: Short for an Aryan, she has lilac eyes, white hair. Considered an outcast because of her colored hair, small elf like face and features.

Personality : Bullishly, Tom boy, Reserved by confident. Hides her real self with humor..ect

Beliefs : She despises the Aryan race and wants to rebel against them but hasn't the courage yet.

History/defining querks : Her mother is a highly respected member of the Aryan parliament but had a relationship with a man of unknown race and produced Bray, a half child. She goes to an Aryan college but is despised and excluded by those around her. As a result she skips school a lot and walks to ursine territory, where she feels more part of something there.

Any ideas of what she could be part of?

wow, i thought this storybook was going to get so lost in the amount of really cool popular storybooks, anyway keep going. As I am really not expecting a load of people to join I have not made any rules on amount of characters or anything like that so have fun and after a few more people join we can start writing. Both Zaddie Caso and Tim. L get in. For Zaddie Caso I would suggest that her character beomes more involved with either mine, the colonel or someone else who joins because she seems quite moody and inexperienced and it would make a nice team.

Name: Vladek

Race: Slav

Race Appearance (similar features for the whole race) : Tall and broad shouldered, with pale brown eyes and black, slightly curly hair. His face is thin and sharply defined.

Personality : Vladek is very hot-headed in standing up for what he believes in, namely friends, family, and his county's freedom. He's cocky, and often doesn't know when to stop at something.

Beliefs : He feels more than most that his people have drawn the short straw in being oppressed by the Aryans - the Slavs were on Hitler's list as untermenschen, apparently a race of 'mongrels'. His belief is that the Aryan race cannot possibly dominate the world forever, as they are not a true master race. He does not believe such a race exists at all.

History/defining quirks : His father fought against the occupying Axis forces in the war, and raised Vladek to understand the importance of freedom, and his nation's independence. However, his father was killed two years ago when an Aryan black-ops team infiltrated the resistance and executed him along with several other members. Vladek and some of the others hunted down most of the black-ops team, but Valdek himself is still searching for his father's killer.

Name: Tesacotael (Tessa)

Race: Vanth

Race Description: The Vanth have the plain appearance of a human, but have crimson eyes and unnatural white hair. Some say they descended straight from demons after staring one in the eyes. The Vanth have it in their genes to be born with at least one tribal mark that is inherited from their father. If they don't have at least one the child, along with the mother, is killed. This is just a way to keep outside genes outside of the tribe. They're very in touch with nature, despite what some people say, and very bloodthirsty killers on the battle field.

Personality: Tessa is very down to earth and calm normally. She loves to just get away from her people just to take a walk in the forest. She does, however, wish her people wouldn't be so blind to the truth that the Aryans are taking over, and that if everything keeps going the way it is, their land will be captured and they will be killed. She also becomes enraged if someone taunts her about her unnaturally small size, considering she's shorter than the normal Vanth female.

Beliefs: She hates the Aryan leaders and knows what they're doing, but wishes her people would see it as well. The Vanths won't do anything to the Aryans, and won't even think about doing anything, unless one of the people from their tribe is killed. Tessa is looking forward to that happening, but at the same time she's dreading it. The Vanths believe that unless a race threatens them first, they are still at peace with that race.

History: Tessa never liked the Aryans. From the time she was three and watched them beat a wandering dog to death until now, she's hated them. The day she figured out what their plans were was the day she was blinded in her left eye. She had yelled at the chief, also known as her father, for being an idiot and not taking action, and in turn, was scarred and blinded on the left side of her face. She still, however, will pick off any Aryan soldier that walk into her forest with a simple bow and arrow. She can have a civilized conversation with someone from the Aryan race, as long as they prove that they don't agree with what their leaders are doing.

We're still open for people to join, maybe someone else who doesn't hate Aryans?

But we have enough people to start.

Name:Rennie

Race: Ursine

Race Appearance: Dark hair and eyes, light brown skin.

Personality : Very passive and shy, doesn't stand out in the crowd but desperately wants to.
Beliefs : That race shouldn't matter, she believes in equality and is curious about the Aryan race

History/defining querks : Her father is the representative of the ursine race.

Brilliant, I'm not sure how many people will still be game for this so it might be an idea to wait for a few more, despite my previous message.

Oh, and because I didn't mention it in my first post. No serious swearing, sex or severe gore. I think that is pretty basic as far as rules go.

Name:pythan

Race: Unknown (brought up by the Ayrans

Race Appearance (similar features for the whole race) : Human like with distinctive features, that remain hidden, e.g. fangs (that grow longer at the sight of blood) eyes that change colour and many other features still unknown, and yet to show....

Personality : very akward, behaviour, very hidden person, sly, cunning

Beliefs : Aryans might have raised me, they might have looked after me, and I thank them for that, but I don't like them, and I will never be one of them.

History/defining querks : Nothing really so far, he was found in a grave yard, at the age of 6 months, and has just been really odd

You realise Aryan is different to vampire right? Despite that, good, a fun addition. If people do want to start they can because it's being very slow to get off the ground. Have a go, or we can always wait for some more characters if you prefer.

Mads, this is taking ages to actually get started. I think I'm gonna drop out,
no offense.


Izzy