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Okay, so in the future the government of the United States turns into a dictatorship and implies rules that make everyone equal (in other words the same). Same hair color (blonde), same eye color (blue), same clothes, etc.

After the government does this, two groups form. There is a resistance who believes that to overthrow the government, you must use force and destroy the government. There is also the underground believers who are christians in hiding and just want to spread God's love to those who don't know him. Both groups live in two different parts of the Rocky Mountains that overshadow a certain Territory. You must choose whose side you're on, and what you are going to do: escape, fight, or share.

Da Rules:
1. No God modding
2. 1 character per person
3. This is realistic, but no sex scenes please
4. 15 character max

This is a christian storybook so if you don't believe but still want to participate, keep comments polite.

What you need for a profile:

Name:
Age:
Gender:
Side:(U.S. citizen, government agent, resistance member, or believer)
Appearance:
Personality:
History:
Other:

My character:

Name: Hayden
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Side: Believer

Appearance: Dark brown hair and dark brown eyes, wears a faded green hoody and cargo pants with oversized tennis shoes. There is a scar down his right cheek.

Personality: Is more quiet but has a leasership air about him. He will help a friend and is very passionate about Christ.

History: Was born into the resistance and occasionally raided government facilities when he turned 13. On a raid they ran into a group of the underground believers and Hayden was ordered to shoot them. His hand froze up and before he knenw it, the people were gone and a Bible was left on the ground. He started reading and eventually left the resistance, but not without a fight. The leader of the resistance cut his cheek and, if he ever saw them again, would probably kill Hayden. Hayden stumbled to the underground believers and they took him in a tended to his injuries. Ever since he's been on raids, but to deliver Bibles, and has had experience disguising himself and infiltrating the government schools and sharing Christ in there.

Other: -
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Interesting. Here goes. (:

Name: Raven Myracle

Age: 18

Gender: Female

Side: Resistance

Apperance: http://th03.deviantart.com/fs43/300W/i/ ... Kisses.jpg

Personality: While she may not be with the Christians, she is a believer. She is a loner. She's in the rebelion but works by herself. When her older brother died, her heart hardened. She can be extremely cruel.

History: Her dad died protecting her pregnant (with her) mom and brother. Then, when they joined the rebellion, she was born, but her mother died. There were hardly any medications and her mother was strained. Her brother took on th job of raising her even though he was only 11. When she was 12 and her brother Max was 23, he went out to gather survival materials. She dosen't know what happened to him. He never came back. Now she's left to rebellion to rebel by herself.

Other: Up for love
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Name: Rosa (Rose, Reyn) Reynes

Age: 19

Gender: female

Side:believer

Appearance: Image

Personality: She's sarcasitc, which makes it hard to tell when she's serious (if she ever is). Rosa loves people, and isn't afraid to run up to someone she barely knows and hug them. If anybody threatens anybody, she immedietly goes off her rocker and starts screaming, yet, she is always quick to forgive if she knows someone is sincere. Rose has NO sense of direction whatsoever.

History: Rose ran when she was ten, away from everything she'd ever known. A man, whom she never found out who he actually was, came to her one night and handed her a Bible with a look that she'd never seen. It (as she would later describe) was freedom in it's real state. In the Bible was a map to a cavern and she followed it best that she could (*cough*). She fell, shattering three fingers and spraing her ankle. The believers found her and brought her in.

She was one of the first to befriend Hayden, and acts as his big sister whether he likes it or not.

Other: up for love.
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We are starting! And since no one has joined but you two (phantom and whitetiger) you two can have two characters if you like! Let's go!

Hayden-

It was a quiet dream. I like quiet dreams. They keep me... centered I guess you could call it. I was just sitting on a bench and looking out at the coast and up at the sky. God had made one of his best paintings ever in my dream.

It was quiet and peaceful and I never wanted it to end. But then a rabbit came up and poked me in the face.

"What are you?"

"I'm Rose!" it said cheerily and poked me in the face again. Ugh, she was waking me up. No!

My eyes peeked open and I saw Rose standing next to me with her finger at the ready.

"You can stop doing that," I mumbled sleepily. She tilted her head and looked at me with an innocent expression.

"C'mon sleepy head! You've got to wake up."

"Why?"

"Maxie has a mission for you," she sang and skipped out the door. Somehow, I think sugar was involved in this. I sat up and took the green sweatshirt that lay across my "bed" and slipped it over my head. I had my tennis shoes on and went outside the small crevice where I slept and looked at the large hollowed out cave of people. The soup was on and I smiled at the smell. Bread.

I was about to go and eat, but Rose slipped her arm under my elbow and pulled me away.

"Nah-uh. Max said he needed to see you now." She dragged me a bit further and then pushed me away. I stuck my hands in my pockets and sulked to the center of the expanse where we kept a few rotted out desks as an office. Max sat at one and looked up.

"Finally Hayden. Do you always have to sleep in?" He sounded annoyed, but he was smiling and I knew it was all in fun. I rolled my eyes and sat on top of the desk.

"Watcha need?"

"We're planning on sending you undercover again in a new school," said Max and he held out a scrap of paper. "These is the address and your alias. You will need to leave soon so you might want to rush breakfast."

"And where are you sending me?" I asked and nervously looked at the address. Max looked at me gravely.

"Territory 7."
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"Do you have a problem with archaeologists?"

"I'm a time traveler. I laugh at archaeologists."

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~Rosa~

Hayden left after learning what was happening and I waved him away with one of my smiles. Then, with a look at Max, my smile fell. Ever since he'd come here, Hayden had been special. He was more enthusiastic about God than most newcomers, who were still terrified of our government. And so, I adored him. Whenever he needed someone to help him; I was there. He was practically my little brother.

"Maxie, I'm going too."

"We've discussed this before, Rose. We need you here."

"Hayden needs backup. I won't let them try and get him again. If he's killed--"

"Everyone has the chance of being killed, Rose. If that happens, it's God's will."

"So we have to encourage it?" My voice rose a little bit and Max blinked in shock.

"Rosa..."

"I'll go help Hayden. I better get an answer soon." Please, God, please. Hayden can do so much good here, and I love him so much. If you think...know...that I shouldn't go, than so be it. Just...please....don't let that kid fall.

"Sorry, Max...I just don't like seeing kids like him go somewhere like that alone."

"Who says that he's alone?" Max gives me a smile and I look at the floor. He was right. Why was he right?

"Please, Maxie. I really want to go. I haven't done anything in so long and Hayden really does need backup."

"Rosa, please
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**Just so you know, Raven really does believe, but she's been through too much which gives her doubts. **

Raven

I guess I was having another one of my 'fits.' My brother used to tell me it was okay to cry but I never did. Not even for my dead parents. Now, with him dead and missing, I cried to much. I hated life. It was cruel and stupid. I often wonder what the point to it is. With everyone you love gone and trying to raise yourself there really was no point. Except to live for my family. Survive for them.

I crawled through the mud and to the tree. I had twisted my ankle and it looked pretty nasty. I wasn't going to be able to make it back home tonight. I needed help. I looked to the sky. Though I wasn't with the christians I believed in God. He could help me.

I looked back at the ground and squeezed my eyelids shut. What was I thinking? God wouldn't help me. I had to help myself. I had been through too much to end up relying on anybody but myself.

<<Sorry it's so short. Maybe Rosa or someone could come find her.>>
Hermione, shut your ungodly, lopsided mouth and quit interrupting! 20 points from Gryffindor. You know, for the brightest witch of your age you can sure be a dumba** sometimes. *smiles* 10 points to Dumbledore!

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**Hey WhiteTiger, I was wondering if the Max we were talking about could be Raven suposedly "dead" brother.**

Hayden-

I walked over to Mary who was handing out the soup.

"Hey Haven, wanna bowl?"

"Yeah. I need to eat quick though."

"Max isn't sending you out on another mission is he?" Mary asked as she latteled the pale soup into a cracked bowl. I gladly took the bowl and slurped up the soup.

"Yeah," I answered.

"Where to this time?"

I hesitated. Mary was a professional worrier. If I told her, she would never let Max hear the end of it.

"Ask no question and you'll recieve no lies," I smiled and handed back the bowl. She took it and didn't look up at me.

"Is it that dangerous?"

"Um... yeah..."

"Where is it?"

"Territory VII." She dropped the bowl and it clattered to the rocky ground. I bent down and picked it up. "Don't worry Mary."

"Worry? I'm not worrying." But she was breathing hard and jittery. She was worrying. "Why there? You realize it's the most watched territory in the west."

"Yeah I know."

"Then why is Max sending you?"

"Maybe he isn't the one sending me."

**Okay, if we can make this storybook go and complete it with only three people running it, that would be so cool! YWS History!**
"Oh please don't tell me you're archaeologists."

"Do you have a problem with archaeologists?"

"I'm a time traveler. I laugh at archaeologists."

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Sure. Go ahead. (: I can't post tonight. I have to get up at like 8 tomorrow to get my hair done so I'll try to do it after all that. (:
Hermione, shut your ungodly, lopsided mouth and quit interrupting! 20 points from Gryffindor. You know, for the brightest witch of your age you can sure be a dumba** sometimes. *smiles* 10 points to Dumbledore!

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~Rosa~

Walking outside, I stared at the view. Nothing could ever make this view bad. Not rain, snow, or an army. It would always be like that and I always wanted it to be. I scanned the horizen then looked down at the scene below. The cavern we were in was up high on a mountain, which made it difficult to get out, but it was safe...that is until they found us.

My gaze stopped when I saw a person under a tree. My breath caught in my throat as I examined the person. She was a girl, and her ankle looked swollen, even from up here.

"Hey." I said with a smile in my voice, praying that she was at least sympathetic to our side. If not, I was making an unexpected trip to Heaven. She looked up at me, startled, "Do you need some help?" I gave her another wide smile.
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Raven

I was curled up. My ankle was throbbing and searing pain was shooting up my entire leg. I heard a twig snap and I twisted towards the sound. My heart thumped loudly. Please don't let it be them, I thought.

"Hey," she said, with a smile in her voice. "Do you need some help?" Was it just me or did she sound a little timid? Was she one of them?

"No," I said, my voice shaking. "I'm perfectly alright. Really." My heart was thumping. Maybe she wasn't bad. Maybe she was a rebel. Or maybe even a Christian. I closed my eyes. Either way I was in big trouble. so here goes nothing.

"Are you...are you different?" I asked. The girl took a step backward.

"What do you mean?" She asked, her voice shaking. Please tell me she wasn't one of them, I prayed.

"Are you a rebel? A Christian? Please. I need your help," I croaked. "I'm a rebel."

Silence. What had I just done? I was screwed.
Hermione, shut your ungodly, lopsided mouth and quit interrupting! 20 points from Gryffindor. You know, for the brightest witch of your age you can sure be a dumba** sometimes. *smiles* 10 points to Dumbledore!

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Hayden-

I had left Mary in a fit of worry, but she would get over it. She always did. I went over to another person with my pack slung over my shoulder.

"Hey, have you seen Rose?"

"Yeah, last I saw her she was heading outside." I thought hard on where she might go. I really wanted to say goodbye. Wait, she loved to go to the eastern entrance and watch the sky.

I walked through the various tunnels and went out through the eastern entrance.

"Rose?" I whispered, hoping that there weren't and government agents around. "Rose?"

"Hayden?" Rosa's voice asked. I looked over and saw Rose with a girl hung on her shoulder.

"Rose?"
"Oh please don't tell me you're archaeologists."

"Do you have a problem with archaeologists?"

"I'm a time traveler. I laugh at archaeologists."

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Raven

It was a trap. Another one was coming for me. Wait. Was she another Christian? I couldn't take the chance. I jumped away from Rosa and ignored my ankle. I knew self-defense and that was all that was going to save me.

"It's okay Raven," Rosa said. So she remembered my name? "Please. we're only here to help you."

I stepped away. She was lying. I took another step, but my foot caught on a rock, twisting my already damaged ankle. I screamed out and fell.

"Roas! What's going on?" The man I didn't know cried out. I threw my hand up to protect myself as the he came closer.

"Stop," I whispered hoarsely. I saw black around the edges of my vision.

Who would have thought a twisted ankle would have got me caught. I'll see you soon Max, I thought bitterly before I fainted.
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Hermione, shut your ungodly, lopsided mouth and quit interrupting! 20 points from Gryffindor. You know, for the brightest witch of your age you can sure be a dumba** sometimes. *smiles* 10 points to Dumbledore!

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**Um... WhiteTiger? Hayden's a guy.**
"Oh please don't tell me you're archaeologists."

"Do you have a problem with archaeologists?"

"I'm a time traveler. I laugh at archaeologists."

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Oops! *blushes* I'm sorry. I completely forgot. I tried to write it really quickly. I don't even know why I wrote that he was a woman. Sorry. I just fixed it...
Hermione, shut your ungodly, lopsided mouth and quit interrupting! 20 points from Gryffindor. You know, for the brightest witch of your age you can sure be a dumba** sometimes. *smiles* 10 points to Dumbledore!

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**tis okay**

Hayden-

The girl feinted, leaving me and Rosa to carry her back into the caves. As we carried her through the tunnels, Toby and Beth (two other believers) saw us and came up. Beth ran back to get some help and Toby stayed to help carry her. Soon there was a brown canvas that we put her on and carried her to the doctor.

"She has a broken ankle now and is very dehydrated. She'll need some rest and fluids and I have a wrap around her ankle to keep her from moving it. She should be fine," said the doctor.

"I think I'll stay with her awhile," said Rosa. I looked from her to the stranger and then back.

"Okay."

"It was good that you came out when you did. What were you doing out there anyway?"

"I came to say goodbye Rose." She smiled kindly and gave me a hug that only big sisters could give.

"Thanks kid. I'll see you later, okay?"

I nodded and walked away, re-slinging the bag over my shoulder. I would walk to the passing point where I would have to dye my hair, grab my contacts and Bibles, and be ready for whatever Territory VII had to throw at me.
"Oh please don't tell me you're archaeologists."

"Do you have a problem with archaeologists?"

"I'm a time traveler. I laugh at archaeologists."

~Doctor Who



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