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Heh, I randomly came up with this in the car. To the song "we are all on drugs" be weezer.

When your walking down the street
with the beat in your feet
and you singing "What can I do?"

And I know your really there
but I'm running out of air
just singing "What can I do?"

Yeeeah....

The old spin off of barney :D


She loves you
You love her
I'm the one in the corner
With a big huge knife and neck for me to use
Wont you say you love me too


She loves you
You love her
And I'm the little loner
With a big huge knife and neck for me to use
Wont you say you love me too


More:
is this what we are now?
is this what we'll be?
crying for mercy
and trying to break free?
fighting my lies now
is this what you see?
drying my eyes now
is something wrong with me?

Um...right


im forgiving all the lies
im forgiving all the pleas
im forgiving
im forgiving
just set me free
just set this heart free
free for me
free to move
free for anybody other than you

Uh huh, give me a break

She was just a girl
He was just a boy
They were looking someone
To hold there hand through something more
She loved him
He loved her
But when she held on
He was already gone

Cheese Cheese CHEEZY!


Okay um yeah, My suckish attempts at lyrics




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It is a really nice song. I like it very much. I has a nice rhythm to it and everyone who reads it can actually make a beat for it, which it really good. Nice use of the rhyme schemes. Overall the song it really good. :)

- Anshita



The capacity of human beings to bore one another seems to be vastly greater than that of any other animal.
— H. L. Mencken