Hey!
Haha this is so cool. xD
Andy... Flying hahaha *goes into chat*
Nah.. he's still on the ground at the moment. :O
Dang it!
Great job Dreamzie!
xxMiaxx
-mors aut honorabilis vita-
Forget the prince with a horse, I want a vampire with a volvo.
Heh, Jiggity is a pirate. It's all so funny, Dreamer. But is Penguin's nose supposed to be that long? Anyways, it's, like Demeter said, golden. It gave me the giggles, and I hardly ever giggle.
There once was a cat. He wasn’t particularly fat. Fuzzy was his favorite mat. And really, that was that.
Oh, but did you really think so? Keep reading, it’s just the start of the show! And as for how far this tale will go… Well, even the cat doesn’t know.
You should colour it! And make it bigger so the speech bubbles are easier to read but other than that, this looks awesome, though maybe more decorations for the room? It's a writer's chat room so anything could be there, the walls could even blend into jungle in places, that would be neat XD
Also, what's with Tiff being so tall? You need to knock her down to Bekah's height (love you Tiff <3) and even though he's slouching Jiggity is a little short.
1. Mesh is on a step stool (You're awesome, Mesh )
2. Tiff is jumping... there was a shadow until I erased it. >.<
3. http://picasaweb.google.com/dreamerfromyws/YWSComic# << Click one of the comics to see it bigger, then click the magnifying glass to the top right corner of the picture to see it even bigger. If you're on a Mac, it might not work.
4. Not Me -- Perhaps you were thinking of you? 5. Pengu does not have a nose. She has a beak. Or a bill. Because she's part Penguin. (But you're the second person to mention her nose being huge, so I must be doing something wrong -- next time!)
And you're right! Jiggs is a little short. I made him and Brad about the same height, and Dono really tall. And Jiggs is taller than Mesh. His feet just go lower on the floor a cuz he's closer. But... yeah. He's short. I'll fix him up next time to not be a hobbit pirate.
Oooh, decorating the walls? Neat idea! I agree with the chat being a little bland. In some of my comics (don't know if they've been posted yet?) there's a picture or two of F.R.E.D. but other than that, Dono's couch was and is the only thing in there other than people. That's a really neat idea, though. I'll definitely think about it for future comics.
Color it? Didn't think of that. I might just do that, actually. Maybe I'll post that too and you guys can pick which one is better.
Dreamer, you are wonderful. xD Who's in the middle of the couch?
XD Mesh's expression looks slightly annoyed. I can only imagine that someone was making short jokes, perhaps?
My favorite character here would be Chiiki. xD So funny, lol, and totally random like her. Andy's is great too, haha. Flying to do reviews or something? xD
Wonderful, Dreamar. Wonderful. xD
June
"I'd steal somebody's purse if I could google it and then download it." -- Firestarter
Mesh: At least I don't need to duck under doorways.
Jiggs: True. But why is the rum gone?
Dono: Better than bumping your head on a table.
Tiff: TRUTH! ...I did that.
The noses on a lot of people, specifically you, Demi and Dono, were a bit big. Tone them down a bit, maybe almost manga style, so they look a bit more natural.
The definition on Jared's arm, the one left uncovered by the couch, is missing. Put something in for his elbow and some shading on his forearm to make it less 2D. ^_^
The shading here, for the shirts and so-forth, could use some work. It's rather 2D, and the reason I'm bugging you on that is because in some locations, like Andy's cape and Brad's shirt, there is shading. Ei- I know you can do it.
The dialogue and thoughts, mostly to the left (Brad, Chiko and Pengu) is really small. You can't really read it.
I just loved how much you used inside jokes. xD I sometimes want to use these kinds of YWS parodies in Greets, but I never do because I don't want to scare people away from the wonderful madhouse that is YWS. This isn'tquiet that bad, but better be safe than sorry!
Considering I remember when this was made, everything fits. It's a little dated now, but still funny. Very, very funny.
xD Gold Star!
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~Rosey
A writer is a world trapped in a person— Victor Hugo
Ink is blood. Paper is bandages. The wounded press books to their heart to know they're not alone.
Cool! I really loved the humour! Especially the way you made the setting and you put in the characters. I think the best is Jack Sparrow saying `Where is the rum?´ awesome!!! But I think you need to improve the hand writing. Because I can not understand everything. I would give you a 4+/5 stars!
Blood is red
But Heaven is blue
The Devil will fined out
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