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Haiku Train

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lose trees and forest,
lose oxygen and air, lose
life's needed nature




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life's needed nature
breathe with plants, give and take
find meaning in it
spot~pebble~peb~pebb~
in any order
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perhaps i can make something of this unreality...
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find meaning in it--
in all the things that pass you
by forgetting you




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by forgetting you
i drown myself, so i learn
to breathe the water
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return




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to breathe the water
to start the hunt at birth, what
baby sharks do do.




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baby sharks do do
do do do do baby shark
do you hear the shark?

(i tried to make the last line still useable lol)
spot~pebble~peb~pebb~
in any order
they/them



perhaps i can make something of this unreality...
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Do you hear the shark?
Sonar goes undetected
Sounds bleeding away
"אם אתה מאמין שיכולים לקלקל, תאמין שיכולים לתקן"
if you believe that you can break it, believe that you can fix




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sounds bleeding away,
crickets count the syllables,
vigiling the night.




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vigiling the night
fading away into grass
and crisp aging skies




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and crisp aging skies
create the day - you and i;
now, we call it us.
[ they/them ]




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now, we call it us--
the light refracting across
the all-colored sky




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the all-colored sky
something all-encompassing
all-inclusive, us
spot~pebble~peb~pebb~
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perhaps i can make something of this unreality...
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all-inclusive, us --
two wrists, one resort band,
freedom overproof
[ they/them ]




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freedom over proof.
we evade court summons and
cross county borders.
I was born to speak all mirth and no matter.




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'cross county borders,
casually charge across
century old lawns



A diamond is merely a lump of coal that did well under pressure.
— Unknown