Young Writers Society

JC- I think the pack splitting up is a good idea. And Ghost and Kayla would make a interesting romance.

Rayne- OK thanks I didn't want to kill either of them, and I didn't even realize Toxin was the only Black Tooth defending there territory. It started as only Kayla, Ghost, and Viking then I guesses everyone sorted of acclumated.

Phantom- Storm and Leo were kidnapped by the Black Tooth then Kayla brought them back. Then because of that Viking attacked her, so there the battle between Viking, Ghost, Kayla, Bors, Cana, and other Yellow Hill wolves who help get Cana out of there. Lhuna killed Lido and almost died. I think Lark is back at the Black Tooth camp with Sting, since she is to young to fight.

It would kinda suck if Black Tooth broke up! It would be the biggest plot killer EVER.
I have another wolf I can bring into the story to join Black Tooth if you want. It seems that Black Tooth isn't really strong as a pack, it's full of traitors! We need some loyal members!
Another note, Lhuna is in a sort of coma, so please don't wake her up just yet! She's going to have some mysterious dreams to do with the future of the wolves in Yellowstone... But it's a surprise!

Rayne- OMG I can't wait to see it! I know it might take you a while but I'm already bursting with exitement! :D I'm just having some trouble with drawing Zodiak, I just can't get him perfect yet. But I'll post them soon

I dunno if the Black Tooth people all getting confused on why exactly are we fighting and whose side we're on. Ghost and Kayla I think should be the only traitors. I don't mean to sound bossy but it as Mad Moo said, we need some loyal Black Toothers. Besides, as we already pointed out, there's like all of Yellow Hill and two Black Toothers fighting Viking.

But what's wrong with the pack splitting up? Its quite realistic actually. Alpha and Beta are dead (well chinchilla, what do you want to do with Viking?) it makes sense for there to be a lot of trouble. There's probably just going to be a smaller Black Tooth pack and a bunch of loners.

Yellow Hill drama idea: Not everyone can trust "nice Black Tooths", you know.

Aw, C'mon, I can't be the only Warriors fan here, can I? lol I keep on typing "clan" instead of "pack". lol this post makes me sound obsessed.

JC
I'm having waaayyyyy too much fun with this.

Hmm. That's interesting. But if Viking wasn't Alpha, who would be? Toxin or someone?

lol I edited my post but that's why we're saying the pack would probably split up. There's no more order (if Viking dies or disappears). Everyone would probably try to take control and nothing would work.

JC

what about Bors? I said in his bio that he is only staying with them because he feels its his duty. If his pack leader attacked his one friend, I think he would probably go rouge, even if he's by himself. I can make another wolf that will not abandon them if you'd like.

In Lhuna's Bio it does say that she finds it hard to trust, so she won't be letting any 'Nice Black Tooths' into the pack any time soon
But if the pack did split up, it would be against the whole storybook. I mean, Yellow Hill would slaughter them all and they could live happily ever after.
The end, storybook KILLED.
But, then again, when I mentioned in my last post about Lhuna's dream, the thing that is endangering wolves in the storybook is a force to be reckoned with. Maybe they could team up for a bit?
I think it would be good if the pack broke up for a little while... but then reformed again after they sort out who's leader. Sound good?
Also, I'm introducing my new character today. I think I might have her join Black Tooth... we'll see

-Moo

well Moo, will everyone in Yellow Hill want to slaughter them all? conflict means drama and drama means alive and beating storybook. we want alive storybook so we want conflict. I think everyone should say their character's attitude towards the other pack and loyalty just so we can see. of course Moo, its your storybook so you are the final say in anything.

JC

Tut tut. It's not my storybook, I only created it! It's everyone's storybook; anyone who joined has a say.
But okay, I do agree with you with the drama thing.

-Moo

Okay, I need Chinchillagirl's permission to do this, but...

Can I have Rayne kill Viking? Because they're fighting right now, and Rayne, being the "war machine" she is, is likely to kill him anyway. If not, it's fine, it's just that no one is very happy with him right now so I think it would make the other wolves "happy" But if you want him to live, it's perfectly okay

Besides, I think it would help tie into Moo and JC's ideas about the pack breaking up temporarily if their beta and alpha are both dead.

Plus, I think it'd be pretty epic if we had an alpha kill an alpha and a beta kill a beta XD

Just saying

Moo - Thanks I'm pretty excited about it. I'm going to try to color it on Paint tonight and if I can get it posted, I will, if not, it will definitely be up tomorrow

Btw, I don't mind if Toxin were to take over as alpha, as you suggested

~Rayne

P.S.

Who are all the wolves that died? Lido is the only one I know of, and I'll take care of Viking, if I'm allowed...O.o

I second that suggestion of Rayne killing Viking.

JC

Rayne - I don't believe any other wolves died. It was posted that Sky-Lark saved them all from death, so yeah, and I don't think Viking should be killed. He is, after all, a valuable asset to Black Tooth as a warrior and scout, but then again, it's up to you and chinchillagirl.

(Sorry about not posting earlier I was at church school!)

Rayne~ You can kill Viking, because one everyone has already pretty much fought him, and now he's like a giant bloody pulp. Have fun!

Moo~ Omg you have started one of the most amazing story books ever!! I think the packs should join together, for awhile.

JC~ I'm glad I'm not the only warriors fan in this book. I sometimes put clan down instead of pack too! lol

Chinchillagirl - That's okay n_n And thanks so much! I'll get started on it right away

Chupatoasta - Okey dokey I see where you're coming from, but I can also see what Moo and JC are getting at. If the alpha and the "back-up" alpha are both dead, Black Tooth can split up until they decide who the new alpha will be

Also: I'm almost done with the group picture I'm working on Tier, then I just have to do Lhuna and Zodaik and it will be done

Thanks guys!

~Rayne

*muah!* She is finito! Lol. I finally finished the group picture!!! I'm so proud of myself n_n Here it is if you want to check it out:

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I really hope you guys like it ^_^ It took up all the time I have left for tonight, so I'll post the Rayne/Viking fight tomorrow as soon as I can. Thanks guys!

~Rayne