Young Writers Society

So guys, here's the DT, so if there's any plot ideas or any questions you can post them here! Also if you've got any character inspired art (I'm not sure if any of you are artistic other than Rayne) that would be awesome.

I've also got a list here of all our members currently, I think we've got enough anyway

Yellow Hill

Lhuna- female
Zodiak- male
Ossal- male
Tier- male
Cana- female
Storm- male
Tiron- male
Nightstar- male
Leo- female
Rayne- female
Bane- male



Black Tooth

Bors- male
Lark- female
[s]Lido- male[/s]
Kayla- female
[s]Viking- male[/s]
Ghost- male
Toxin male
Hera- female
Talon- male
Sting- female

Dispersals

Sonnet- female
Nellie- female
Jericho- male
Glory- female
Randyll- male
Scythe- female
Scimitar- male

Ok, for the whole Storm and Leo captured idea....

Kayla has been to Yellow Hill before and is friends with them. I'm thinking that Lhuna (?) comes to rescue Storm and Leo in the Black Tooth Camp but they're aren't there because Kayla decided to secretly take them back to Yellow Tooth instead.

? Thats a rough plot idea, any one can suggest something else.

JC

Yeah sure, that is fine! It fits in ok with my little idea. Guys, jok has been inactive the whole time so I think we should kill off Lido. Does anyone want to be the new Alpha?
I've got an idea for the Lhuna/Lido fight so if you would, leave that part to me

-Moo

Well if Lido dies, Viking becomes alpha...Kayla would probably nominate Ghost as beta.

sound good, guys?

JC

Sounds good! But will it be okay if both of my people be the head of Black Tooth. I don't think Ghost should be Beta, because he'll be all like I'm the new Ghost who doesn't kill for fun. Then Viking will be all like I'm the leader now, lets kill anyone who objects.

Okay, this has been driving me crazy trying to figure out!

Moo, does Zodiak get nervous around Rayne because he likes her or because he's afraid of her? They both make sense, but I can't figure it out If it's a surprise, that's cool, I just was wondering so I know what's going on when Rayne and Zodiak are around each other.

~Rayne

P.S. Thanks for the recognition n_n You gave me a great idea I'm going to make fan art of all the pack members! Be watching for it

Ha ha, no problem. Your art deserves recognition! I drew some line art of Lhuna and Zodiak play fighting, Ossal looking moody, and also I'm working on one of Rayne and the Yellow Hill pups
And I can't wait to see your art!
I just randomly made Zodiak act like that for fun and to make things a little more interesting. That fact that it's been driving you xcrazy is quite amusing He kind of likes her, but feels intimidated by her slightly because she doesn't speak much to him.
Hope that relieved you of your prolonged pain! :P

-Moo

I started it today, but I'm making a giant group picture of all the Yellow Hill wolves, and when I finish it, I'll make one of Black Tooth Should I include Lido? I can't wait to see your pics!

THANK YOU!!! Haha XD Because if I were ever to put them together, I wouldn't want to make them all flirty if that isn't the case, or Zodiak scared to death if that isn't the case. But I can work with a little of both

Anywho, thanks again!

~Rayne

Okay who should Viking or Ghost die? I don't want to kill Ghost, but that would mean he wins, and then the Black Tooth will probably stop there raids, and that is basically the whole story line.

But if Viking wins, that will mean Ghost died and then they would have no shaman! And it will keep the story going for sure, but since most of the pack is now fighting Viking then he'll probably have them killed.

~A very confused Chinchilla

Ghost? Die after saving Kayla? NEVER besides, I thought it would be a nice romance : - P

What's wrong with Black Tooth having new people in control? I think that would be the drama. Whether Black tooth should continue to have raids and be mean (lol) or have peace with Yellow Hill. Some of the pack wants the former, some the latter.

Maybe the pack splits up? who knows.

JC

Maybe someone else could run in and split up the fight? Then they somehow make peace in order to go fight the Yellow Hill wolves and help the rest of Black Tooth. Because I think, at the current point, there's only like...two or three Black Tooth wolves fighting the entire Yellow Hill pack. I'd say the majority of them are at this little isolated location with Ghost and Viking and Kayla and Hera and Talon and Bors and all them. So, maybe someone could come in and tell them that there's only a couple wolves down at the shore and they're getting their butts kicked or something XD

I dunno. Just a suggestion.

~Rayne

Oh, wait. I take that back. Toxin is the only one down there. So, maybe have Hera or Talon tell them that Toxin is going to die or something and they could all go help. Not that that would be a good thing, I'm just saying XP

Okay, I'll post when I get out of the shower... :\

Thanks so much!!!

~Rayne

Okay - I have been gone from this too long!

Can someone please post a brief summary of where we are in the plot, where Storm and Lark are, and were I should post next?

I have read all of the posts, but only skimming.. I've got the general idea, but where did Storm and Leo disappear to? And what about Lark? She seems to kind have sunk through the cracks -

Also, just on a side not, it's not a huge problem... But so much of Lark's character is timid, can you guys still weave that into any future posts involving her. For example, I think there was once instance where Lark was begging to go out on the raid? She'd be more likely to want to hide than to fight... Of course there are exceptions to this rule, but she was raised during Lido's reign... If it weren't for her relationship with Bors, she would be long dead. Long ago, Lark decided to work hard to stay out of the center of attention -

Just thought I'd make that note...