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Ill take two I guess, then LaReina could be in the group, with Koka as the teacher, then the others could be one, and anyone else who joins could be squad three?
Words - so innocent and powerless as they are, as standing in a dictionary, how potent for good and evil they become in the hands of one who knows how to combine them. ~Nathaniel Hawthorne




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Hey, everyone, I am curently re-working this story so that it contains a little more of my own creative thought, and am solidifying the world, etc. We can still continue this one if we want, but I will be posting another one that will hopefully make more sense to everyone and attract more people.

Edit: Its the same thing, just clarified, so just repost your profiles on the new thread.
Words - so innocent and powerless as they are, as standing in a dictionary, how potent for good and evil they become in the hands of one who knows how to combine them. ~Nathaniel Hawthorne




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uh, where is it?
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I wanted to see if everyone approved before I posted. I dont want to take up useless forum space.
Words - so innocent and powerless as they are, as standing in a dictionary, how potent for good and evil they become in the hands of one who knows how to combine them. ~Nathaniel Hawthorne




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Why re-work it? Its fine the way it is.
"Man is least himself when he talks in his own person.

Give him a mask and he will tell you the truth."

-- Oscar Wilde




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I dont know, something about it just doesnt seem right, I dont know what it is. I gave more details on the countries (more description) and just included alot more detail on how everything works, so that you dont have to be a Naruto fan to understand.
Words - so innocent and powerless as they are, as standing in a dictionary, how potent for good and evil they become in the hands of one who knows how to combine them. ~Nathaniel Hawthorne




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Okay. I will just transfer my character profile over there.

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We shall not cease from exploration, and the end of all our exploring will be to arrive where we started and know the place for the first time.
— T.S. Eliot