Hate Me

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KEMPTON, I actually really like your suggestion; simple, but yet, it does make the final line flow much better! Thanks for the tip!




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Hate me, hate me, hate me, I would have maybe taken out the third "hate me"
Is that all you can do?
You don’t even know me---
But I've seen a thousand like you. Great!

I really like this poem. It's very simple, but that's where it's beauty lies.
In the midst of winter/I found there lay within me/an eternal summer




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I also like your suggestion, emmaline49! I'll consider changing it! Thanks for the pointer!




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So true, yet so simple-why is it that everything that is right comes so easily?
"This is our decision,
to live fast and die young...
Yeah it's overwhelming,
but what else can we do?
Get jobs in offices and
wake up for the morning commute?

The models will have children,
we'll get a divorce,
find some more models;
everything must run its course!

Fated to Pretend




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its simple, but has a deep meaning. I like that it makes you realize whats happening and ignites the idea that there are common behaviors of hate between thousands of people. People spread hate even when they don't know the person who they are shoving it towards.




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It's very cute! Witty too ha. I like :)
The only true failure, is when you give up. ♥



Be led by your talent and not by your self-loathing ... everything beautiful in the world is within you.
— Russell Brand