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You have just been brought into the ranks of the Firewing, an elite group of element controllers. They are named Firewing because the elite have wings that glow the different colours of a flame (blue, red, orange, white, blue, violet and gray). You start off as a trainee, one without wings. As your powers grow, so do your wings. You can fly for short periods when your wings are half-complete, and fly for hours when you have mastered the element.

The plot: The other kingdoms are growing jealous of the power the Firewings have. They have kidnapped the Elite and are forcing them to harm rival kingdoms. Because the trainees aren't as powerful, they have not been taken. Now, it's up to them to save the Elite and to stop the war.

Rules:

- No God modding
- No perfect characters
- Only one characters per element
- No more then one character per person
- No killing characters without the creator's permission
- Keep in PG-13. No sex scenes and no excessive swearing
- Each post must be at least one decent-sized paragraph, preferable more.
- Please proof-read your posts as courtesy to other storybookers.

Elements:

[s]Fire (wings glow red/pink)[/s]
[s]Air (wings glow white)[/s]
[s]Water (wings glow light blue)[/s]
[s]Earth (wings glow orange)[/s]
[s]Nature (wings glow yellow)[/s]
[s]Animal (wings glow violet/deep blue)
Darkness (wings glow gray, like ash)[/s]

** Elements with a crossed line have been taken.

Extra characters:

Because this storybook filled up so fast (with mostly girls) I have added three more characters:
[s]Healer
Swordsman
Spy[/s]

I would prefer it if you played these characters as guys, but you don't have to.

** Characters crossed out have been taken.

Basic Profile Outline

Name:
Age:
Gender:
Element:
Ability: (What they can do with their element. Example: Fire has the ability to manipulate and control fire and heat. They can make fire with the snap of their fingers, or put out a burning inferno with a thought, but if they make a fuel-less fire, the energy must come from somewhere. (Things like that)
Weakness: You must have one. Fire is weakened by water, for example. A personality weakness is nice too.
Appearance:
Personality:
History:
Other:

Discussion thread can be found here.
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With permission from Rosey, I'm claiming Fire now. But I don't have permission from my mom to stay on the computer any longer, so I'll edit in my profile tomorrow after school.

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EDIT: Oh, shoot. I guess I got beat claiming fire by four minutes! I'll fix my profile for the new element.

Name: Meela Katsukova

Age: 16

Gender: Female

Element: Air

Ability: Meela gathers winds like a child gather's flowers. She can't make a gust into a whirlwind, but she can certainly gather up enough to weave a huge windstorm. The winds also carry images and sounds, which Meela can scry. Meela also appears to have telekinesis and levitation, but it really is just air manipulation.

Weakness: Meela is shy, preferring to play with the winds than with others. She's also prone to absorb emotions that the wind brings. For example, if she scrys someone crying, she feels inexplicably sad. As a result, Meela is sort of...emotionally unstable. She's also claustrophobic.

Appearance: Straight brown hair with choppy bangs that hangs down to about hip-length and big blue eyes framed with dark lashes. She's slender, not muscular or athletic at all. Pale skin, but not creepy-pale. Just a creamy color with a dash of pink. She talks with an accent.

Personality: Shy, kind, and a little bit emotionally unstable, Meela's unpredictable. When in control of herself, she's just a quiet little girl who's naturally compassionate. When the wind brings her emotions, though, there's no telling what she'll do.

History: Meela's a foreigner, talking with a light accent and occasionally slipping into her native language. She was noticed by an Elite on a family excursion to the capital of this kingdom from their own. When the Elite talked to her parents, they immediately disowned Meela because they saw her as a "witch," as the people of her native kingdom saw those with a knack for the elements. She grew up with the Elite that found her, and has no contact with her real family.

Other: Up for love, if anyone can handle her mood swings. ;)
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Name: Seline

Age: 17

Gender: Female

Element: Animal

Ability: She can shape-shift, talk to animals mind-to-mind and is able to sense them around her. Often, animals come to her because she makes them feel better. Later she'll discover she can heal them. Her preferred shape is any sort of cat, but she can take on any shape.

Weakness: If she is injured while in an animal form, her injuries are often much worse in her human form. She can't heal herself in animal form, so she must rely on others to help her. She also has a hard time relating to people. It takes awhile for her to trust.

Appearance: Dusty-brown hair with green eyes and freckles across her nose. She always looks lightly tan, but she doesn't really get darker in the summer. She's rarely seen without an animal of some sort around her. Usually, she's talking to it.

Personality: Very quiet and secretive. Nobody has been able to get past the fact she talks to animals enough to really get to know her. But when she does trust you, her loyalty is unmatched. She can have a temper though.

History: Her parents brought her up, but she never really talked to them. Everybody that she was ever around was put off by the fact she talked to animals and would often spend more time with them then thought necessary. Was noticed by an Elite when he passed through her village.

Other: Up for love
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Sorry Abstract, but Maybe claimed Fire before you. You'll have to pick another element.
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I guess I'll try this. Unless you don't want a person that's going to be gone from the 5th to the 11th. If you're all right with it then I claim Air.
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Air got claimed right before your post Firestar.

As for being gone, that should be fine.
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Name: Ebony

Age: 16

Gender: female

Element: water

Ability: She can control where the tide and can manipulate water. She is a very good swimmer and can stay under water for long periods of time. Ebony can turn water into ice and throw them at people.

Weakness: She acts too young sometimes for her age, can be really annoying, she's totally dependant on people and is actually terrified of fire.

Personality: She is like a little kid. Ebony is hyper and is too innocent to really understand everything. she can get annoying but can also be so cute that it hurts. It also doesn't help that she's vertically challenged and looks the part. (She just hasn't grown up yet. She used to hate it, before be had to relearn everything {see history})

History: She doesn’t remember anything about his past because she was brainwashed by a rival of her family’s about a year ago and has been relearning morals and rules. Her family recently died in a fire so he's all alone.

Other: Up for Love. She also speaks in third person.

Appearance:
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Name: Sasha

Age: 17

Gender: Female

Element: Nature

Ability: Controls all plants, able to grow anything. She can create thorns to use like bullets.

Weakness: Terrified of fire and can't take when anybody so even dares to break her heart.

Appearance: Small, petite. She has flowing black hair with green highlights. Her skin is olive toned and she has deep green eyes.

Personality: Very social and fun loving. She has a very good sense of humour.

Other: Up for love.
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Wow...all girls so far...kinda funny.
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Whoa! Full in fifteen minutes!

Firestar, if you don't want earth, then please bow out and give your spot to somebody else.

Okay, I was really hoping to keep this small, so I am no longer acceping new element characters.

*Edit* You can now play as one of two non-element characters.
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You should feel loved, Rosey. I mean...full if fifteen minutes? Amazing.
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Also, since there are four female profiles, the "up for love" option is no longer there. Unless somebody is willing to change their character's gender or I get new people.
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Oh, maybe I should mention that I'll be gone from the 5th to the 12th, too. Although I think I may still have internet access...
hahah, I'm excited! Even if we have a slight estrogen overload. :D
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Oh-kay, if two people are gone then it might be a good idea to wait until then.

Hmm, because of the popularity of this storybook, I will add two non-element characters to be claimed by other people. I'd prefer it if you played them as guys, but you can play them as girls.
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