Please may someone review my book

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mkjohns
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Sun Feb 01, 2009 8:31 pm
mkjohns says... · Sun Feb 01, 2009 8:31 pm
Hey, i have just posted a short story in the history section about a small Roman battle and i have been waiting for about two days and I still do not have any reviews :cry: please may one of you do a honest review of it, than you
it is in the history section and it is called the first taste

thank you

John
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Snoink
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Sun Feb 01, 2009 8:54 pm
Snoink says... · Sun Feb 01, 2009 8:54 pm
Done and done. Though you may not like it. I'm a rather picky reader. :P

Next time, critique other stuff! That way, more people will notice you and actively look up your work without you having to ask. :)
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Sun Feb 01, 2009 11:10 pm
Fishr says... · Sun Feb 01, 2009 11:10 pm
Completed, and with photos too!

I'm rather picky myself but you did ask for an honest review.
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