Backstory

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Okay, I'm writing a story set far, far in the future. There has been a lot of backstory that's important to the plot of the novel, but I'm not sure how to reveal it all. My MC is a student, so I'm thinking of having it explained during a history lesson. Would that be kind of cliché?
There once was a cat.
He wasn’t particularly fat.
Fuzzy was his favorite mat.
And really, that was that.

Oh, but did you really think so?
Keep reading, it’s just the start of the show!
And as for how far this tale will go…
Well, even the cat doesn’t know.




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In short- Pretty much.

Long, drawn out history lessons not only are cliche, but they bore the reader and can be frustrating to them as well. Why? Because we don't really care. We want to find out how this fits into our character's lives, not just that all this happened.

My tip- Either get a really good hook scene so the reader is willing to go through all that history, or slowly bring it out as your character lives his/her day-to-day life. He notices this and the backstory for that item goes like so.

Hope I helped!
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Only bring in backstory if it's relevant to the main plot and adds depth to it. Episodes of Law & Order are a good example.
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Ah, alright. Thank you Rosey, Gahks.
There once was a cat.
He wasn’t particularly fat.
Fuzzy was his favorite mat.
And really, that was that.

Oh, but did you really think so?
Keep reading, it’s just the start of the show!
And as for how far this tale will go…
Well, even the cat doesn’t know.




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Or! If your backstory is really interesting and complicated, prequels may be needed. :)
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Hmm... possibly...
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Yeah, there's been a couple of wars that happened. More like two wars that lasted for almost two hundred years in total. I plan on writing about those, but so far, I'm writing about the Third War. And even with the first war, it's set about ninety years in the future.
There once was a cat.
He wasn’t particularly fat.
Fuzzy was his favorite mat.
And really, that was that.

Oh, but did you really think so?
Keep reading, it’s just the start of the show!
And as for how far this tale will go…
Well, even the cat doesn’t know.



You wake up in the morning and it feels impossible? Good. You do it anyway.
— Martin Scorcese