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ashleylee · 2008-12-26T21:05:56Z

Hello writers from YWS! I have decided to open a "Will Review for Food" Thread because I've noticed that I don't review as much, so I've decided that I need a little push. But, don't worry. I love to review. Now that my writing is taking a new turn, I really enjoy reading other's works. And hopefully as I go along, my reviewing skills will improve as well :wink: Requirements : ~ There really isn't any! :D I'll review anything from poetry to advanced works. ~ However, to contradict the first statement, I have never done anything with scripts or lyrics or art, but if you want me to, I'll have a go at it :wink: Advanced Critiques : ~ I love these kind because I can be picky without the worry that the author of being slightly sad by it. I just want to make it clear that all these reviewers/writers on this site are here to help. ~ However, if you ever feel like I am being overly harsh or just plain mean, I want you to let me know. Feel free to PM me and let me know flat out if I am. That's why I'm here and I wouldn't want to offend anyone. Payment : ~ FREE! My services are here to help you so don't worry about giving me points or anything. I just like to do this :D Time Period : ~ I only get to go on the internet every other day, so I have to be reasonable and say that I should be able to get to you within a week, depending on how many post on this link and say they need reviews. Other things to know : ~ I'm trying to perfect my reviewing skills so just be warned that they might change from person to person as I try different things :wink: ~ Mostly I try to do a quote-by-quote review with things like spelling errors, oddly-worded sentences, ect. Warning though - I'm not that good at grammar so if you're looking for that, I wouldn't go to me. ~ Then, after I do the quote-by-quote, I usually give you my overall opinion. Sometimes it's short and sometimes it's long, depending on the story. I am aiming to lengthen that part of the review so just bare with me through that part. Example of my reviews : ~ A Modern Day Twist - One Author: Merry_Haven Review by me: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic39753.html ~ She Should Have Known Better Author: CastlesInTheSky Review by me: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post469547.html?highlight=#469547 ~ Influence Chapter One Author: Ducati Review by me: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic40796.html Well, I guess that's really all you need to know. So don't be shy! Post away and I'll get working on your reviews!

ashleylee

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Thu Mar 05, 2009 2:24 am

ashleylee says... · Thu Mar 05, 2009 2:24 am

SeleneForeverDream:

I am officially done with your piece that you requested I review.

If you ever need further reviews, just post here or ask me through a PM.

Hope I helped!

"Woe to the man whose heart has not learned while young to hope, to love—and to put his trust in life."
~ Joseph Conrad

"Music washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life."
~ Red Auerbach

mhmmcolleenx0

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Thu Mar 05, 2009 4:31 am

mhmmcolleenx0 says... · Thu Mar 05, 2009 4:31 am

Hey! Would you review this for me?

Genre: Other Fiction
Link: topic44771.html

It's not perfect yet, the idea just popped into my head and I had to write it down! Hope you can help!

"Can't stop, won't stop. I must be dreaming."

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Thu Mar 05, 2009 7:29 pm

ashleylee says... · Thu Mar 05, 2009 7:29 pm

mhmmcolleenx0:

I just finished reviewing your story and must I say, you had a really nice, solid beginning. I wish you the best of luck finishing it and if you ever need further help, feel free to let me know :wink:

Happy Writing!

"Woe to the man whose heart has not learned while young to hope, to love—and to put his trust in life."
~ Joseph Conrad

"Music washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life."
~ Red Auerbach

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Tue Jun 06, 2023 9:00 am

DreamyAlice says... · Tue Jun 06, 2023 9:00 am

Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

-ALICE

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