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Hi Katie, I'm new to this site and poetry really isn't my forte, but I think this poem will really speak to a lot of people going through the same thing, and it's really honest. I know you're maybe hoping for some constructive criticism but I don't really have any, I just think sometimes it's encouraging to just know that your work is having an effect on people...doncha think?

Anyways, good work, I enjoyed it.

Roo :)
Hangin' all her hopes on the stars...




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Thanks for all your help, everyone! I've decided to submit it for the YWS journal. :)
Peepsls on this website ought not to be so hatin against other writers!

It's hella hard just to post your stuff to this place, yo!



In short, Mrs. Pontellier was beginning to realize her position in the universe as a human being, and to recognize her relations as an individual to the world within and about her.
— Kate Chopin, The Awakening