Critiques by Canislupis [Closed]

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Hey Rascalover!

Yours in done. Hope I helped at least a little. :)

Come on, people, I need more!




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Done, classy! I really liked your story.

Anyone else?




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Do you think you could review the first two chapters of my fantasy novel? The link is in my signature. Thank you :)




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Title: The Specters of Verity and Angelica Flink
Genre: Fantasy
What you'd like me to look at: Everything if you have the time, it's pretty brief
Link to page: topic64414.html (also in my signature)
Know what I would love? A review!
topic64587.html




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Silversharpie--Done! Hope I helped. :)

Laura--Read it, but not had time to post the review yet. You should see it soon, though.

Attolia--Sorry this is taking so long. XD The third one should appear shortly.

Anyone else? I can take up to two more, I think! :)

Lupis




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And... Done! I am now only nine reviews away from my goal!




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*Bumpity bump bump bump*

I know, I'm shameless. But come on people! I'm only three reviews away from another star! I could do that today!




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No need to be shameless, I'm a lover of reviews, so if you could kindly review Part One of The Fall, my latest work here topic64749.html. Gratefulness, hugs, and possibly a gift after much sucking up will be given!
I will eviscerate you in fiction. Every pimple, every character flaw. I was naked for a day; you will be naked for eternity.
Chaucer, A Knight's Tale

Deceiving others. That is what the world calls a romance.
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Done! Thanks for asking me--I loved your story. I am now only two reviews away from my goal!

Anyone else?




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Hello!

I have reached my goal. But, since I achieved it in less than half my time goal, and still have fiteen days left, my new goal is 470.

Request away!




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Hey canislupis,

Thank you again for all the reviews.

I really did not think I'd have chapter three up this fast, but here it is
topic64924.html

I'd love it if you could give it another review!

Thank you tons,

Attolia :D




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theboss--Done!

Attolia--Sure thing! I'll get to it as soon as possible.

Lupis




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And, done! As usual, that was an absolute pleasure to read. :)

Anyone else?

Lupis



It is only a novel... or, in short, only some work in which the greatest powers of the mind are displayed, in which the most thorough knowledge of human nature, the happiest delineation of its varieties, the liveliest effusions of wit and humour, are conveyed to the world in the best-chosen language
— Jane Austen, Northanger Abbey