Need a story ripped apart *coughs*

PLEASE READ BEFORE POSTING A LINK. THATS ALL I ASK.

So, if you need reviews, post a link below. I'll review it...eventually. I want to give time to each story so I can review it properly. On the site constantly, so I'll get to it. Please post a link on here. Try not to PM me. I don't check it very often. Try to only put one or two things to review in one post. That way, I can get different people. After I am done reviewing yours however and have done some others, you can post another one after that however. Thanks!

I CAN REVIEW:

Fiction (any sort)
Art
Poetry

I WILL NOT REVIEW:

Fanfiction
Song lyrics
Non Fiction
Horror (because I stay home alone alot at night, and I hear noices. Scary pieces of work won't help that any.)

*Please keep in mind that I won't review anything with excessive bad language or sex scenes.
I can waver on certain non fictions.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post400537.html#400537

I just edited this, so I hope it's better! (: But a rip-apart critique is welcome. Haha.

Done! Lets have another.

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here. just don't ripped it apart too much. .

Hi!

Here's the link: topic35160.html

It's in other fiction.

Thanks!

~Lupis

Title: My Dearest Madelyn
Genre: Romance
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It's been shredded quite a bit already, so feel free to do your worst!

Night Mistress, yours has been reviewd. I tryed not to rip it up to badly.

canislupis yours has been critiqued. It was beautiful.

anti-pop I'm about to start on yours.

So keep the writing coming everyone.

here is chapter one if you could reveiw that too.

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Done with Anti-pop, that story was loaded with emotion.
I'm working on Night Mistress.
So keep them stories coming.

Here's mine.
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I need my story to be ripped.. Uh Reviewed I mean (The joke smells I know.)

Please rip these apart:

Grim Reaper:

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic34985.html

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic35271.html

Teddybear22, i finished yours.
On to Lord Anzius.
Keep them coming!

Lord Anzious, I reviweed yours. Anymore? Come on.

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Here's the first chapter, feel free to be as brutally honest as possible.

Dr, Atl your review is done.
Anymore?