I have something, but it's very long so take as long as you like Don't worry if you don't get round to it:-
topic40733.html It's called Orli and Eden.
-Kirsten xxx
and I'm totally willing to donate points
I've noticed you've broken Orli and Eden up to make it shorter, dreamland. Do you mind if I do those instead, or do you still want me to critique the one you gave me?
Oh, and I'm also being ridiculously slow, so just be patient. I will get everything done.
A writer is a world trapped in a person— Victor Hugo
Ink is blood. Paper is bandages. The wounded press books to their heart to know they're not alone.
Hi ^^ It's Shina again. If you have time do you think you could review these for me. An attempt at poetry and a new chapter in my novel in desperate need of reviews.
Thank you ^^
Poem: post478157.html#478157
I'll get those done.... I just hope you don't mind a bit of a wait.
Oh-kay, well, I won't be taking any more requests for a while. A week at least, maybe more if I still have a cue. I'm a little doped up on antibiotics (wisdom teeth got taken out recently), so I might be unfairly harsh.
Thanks for your patience!
A writer is a world trapped in a person— Victor Hugo
Ink is blood. Paper is bandages. The wounded press books to their heart to know they're not alone.
I'll only take three things to review at a time, and I have two spots filled at the moment. Priority goes to the people that have waited the longest. I usually get at least one review done a day (sometimes two or three), so the cue should move pretty quickly.
A writer is a world trapped in a person— Victor Hugo
Ink is blood. Paper is bandages. The wounded press books to their heart to know they're not alone.
Oh and the prologue is ment to be telling (and not showing, I did this on purpose). The meaning of the prologue is to base the story to the reader about what is going on.
1.2, 1.3, 1.4 and 1.5.
