Weed

((((((((if weed is not your subject then go to rap or dramatic poetry- whatever your in))))))----but if you love weed--then enjoy this song!!!!!!!!!!!!




It was a hot day outside
Global warming world wide
Every fan was turned on high
I lay down looking fine
It was the month of July
And I said “Lets Get High”

Let’s fly super highhhhhh
Close my eyes and cryyyyyy
That is how you flyyyyyy
Through the night skyyyyyy

My eyes are feeling cold
Some more weed was unfold
Placed down on the table and crushed
Placed right into the bull
Then light it up and go into a “Different world”

Chill homie- chill chill homie
And I
Chill homie- chill chill homie
And I
Got high for the next three hours
Wow wow- wow wow
Wow wow- wow wow

Weed should be illegal everywhere
You should be able to get high anywhere
Cigarettes kill more people then weed
It makes your brain bleed
And your veins are freeeeee
Live above influence is a bunch of shit
With your friends weed should be split
I call my friends and say come on by
And here at my house “We Get High”

Let’s fly super highhhhhh
Close my eyes and cryyyyyy
That is how you flyyyyyy
Through the night skyyyyyy
(Slowly Fading Away) Through the night skyyyyyy
(Slowly Fading Away) Through the night skyyyyyy
(and done)




((((((((((((ok enough with this junk about weed being bad
if you haven't tried it then don't judge it
more people die in elevators (what the hell) then they do from weed
everyone who never had weed don't even pout up any comments on that
almost everyone i know at my school smokes weed
everyone at my work including my manager smokes
there is a song (i was going to clean my room until i got high)- that song is good no one seems to complain about that except for some dumb good children who are a bunch of squares--don't comment on this unless you know what WEED is all about))))))))))

Weed should be illegal everywhere
You should be able to get high anywhere

That's contradictory.

Live about influence is a bunch of shit

It's above not about.


Yeah, I think this is pretty stupid. No offence. Good job rhyming, but ... really?

I am sorry Vlad this time I will have to put you down... What you are doing is wrong!!!
For example I try to tell people that drugs are bad but you are telling everyone that is good. Don't tell me that you started liking that crap or did you?
I am sorry dude you are like a brother to me but a brother has to care and I care that you are writing this junk. I don't care if it is a joke because when I talk to you I see that you think it is cool but it is not. I like you old rap and rock songs when you wrote about moral. but this is far from it. I don't even need to grade the literature I already don't like this. If I would be you I would start writing stuff about ethics and moral.

EDIT: But don't get me wrong I still conceder you as a great freind. Just don't typ this shit any more.

Moderator: No bad words outside of stories/songs/poetry/etc!

This is not a debate about drugs, if you wish to debate, take it to the debate group

ok enough with this junk about weed being bad
if you havent tried it then dont judge it
more people die in elevators (what the hell) then they do from weed
everyone who never had weed dont even pout up any comments on that
almost everyone i know at my school smokes weed
everyone at my work including my manager smokes
there is a song (i was going to clean my room untill i got high)- that song is good no one seems to complain about that exept for some dum good children who are a bunch of squares--dont comment on this unless you know what WEED is all about

Dude, my goodness.=D Let me start off by saying where in the world did you get this idea?! I find it absolutely genius, and highly genius. Kudos to you. Perfect structure, there's one line that's contradictory, but other than that, great.

Let's watch the double (...triple) posting and the debates, please. OverEasy has the right of it: this is a forum for lyrical discussion, not for moral argumentation.

I suggest, 1993vlad@gmail.com, that you make an attempt to alter your attitude towards those who have commented. You are not obligated to agree with them, you are not even obligated to see their points of view - you are, however, required to treat their viewpoints with respect. You do not get to cherry-pick your audience. To attempt to do so is both immature and ill-advised.

In order to avoid further drama in your thread, I suggest that you keep the profanity confined to your writing, and leave them out of your subsequent posts and epilogues.

And don't forget to write in proper English and capitalize everything that needs to be capitalized. ^^

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Anyway, these lyrics were quite strange. In the middle of it, you started getting really preachy:

Weed should be illegal everywhere
You should be able to get high anywhere
Cigarettes kill more people then weed
It makes your brain bleed
And your veins are freeeeee
Live above influence is a bunch of shit
With your friends weed should be split
I call my friends and say come on by
And here at my house “We Get High”

And I don't know. Your listeners, if they listen for this for the lyrics, don't want to be lectured on whether weed is correct or not. They don't care. They're probably just listening to this as an ode to weed, or whatever. So why are you preaching to the choir about this?

I'm not quite sure what genre this is in, but you don't have to write the longer words like "cryyyyyyyyy." I don't think it's necessary. ^^ If the lyrics are written properly, you won't have to do that at all.

Hope this helps!