No,no. When I talked about the dumpster I meant it was right next to her. I should probably make that more clear. Thanks for the critique and I'll do my best to fix what I can.
If I can impact one person, just one, with my writing before I die, then I've lived a great life
I already critiqued this like a month ago before your mom made you take it off. It's somewhere around here. Sorry In_the_Moonlight but I don't have time to go through it again. I'll try and find my previous critique...
PM when you post something else or you get the next part up (I probably didn't need to write that you would have done it anyway)
P.S. LOVE IT!!!! Finally I get to read your writing that isn't from school. *prances around the room jumping up and down for joy...um no not really. But I am happy that you finally posted this.
