Blinkingly-good Crits

I want something to review!

*points to review counter*

Still below 5000! Get them sent in, I offer high-quality reviews, I am more proficient in the prose areas but I will take a look at other areas.

Seeing as you've had no other requests could you please review the prologue and first chapter of my sad excuse for a novel 'Magic Carpet Ride'

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Neither are finsihed but it's always good to know how things are coming along

Merci beaucoup!

No probs

*Sighs* Haha, if you insist. Actually, I'm just finishing up a very big edit - I'd love it if you'll look at that when I'm done. I'll let you know.

(You must be bored to stalk my guestbook for this! )

~JFW1415

Boredom? *shifty eyes*

Sure no problem, just say the word

I'm also almost done with a massive edit. I'll post the link when it's up.

OK!

Come on people, all these lovely pieces of work are looking at me for a review and I don't know which to go for!

I'm back.

Okay, the link is:

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P.S. I give points to good reviewers

Hello


If you please

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Thanks!

OverEasy

Sure

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Scroll down until you get to the Gandhi quote and the chapter called "Drych-ddelwedd".

Thanks!

Hey, this is a story I started a while back and I wanted to know if I should drop it or continue. Please review. Just an all around review of you have time; character, plot, dialog, etc.

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I must bombard you! D:

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When you have time. ^_^

Murder & Investigation 1 - Before the Murder

Murder & Investigation 2 - Discovery of the Murder

Eh, sorry for the lame titles. The first one has like a bajallion critiques, but the last one has none. Thank you so much.

-Jared

I completely forgot about this thread--I will have these done before I go on holiday, thanks!