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Name: Extinguished
Genre: Romance/Horror
Summary: When a man's wife is about to die, a mysterious person shows up and claims to have the ability to save her. (And no, I'm not telling you the ending).
Word Count: 2023 words
Link: topic46620.html

I understand that your time is valuable, so I'm donating 200 points in advance for this critique, (I know it doesn't seem like much, but I don't have many points at the moment). I'll also be willing to donate more points after you critique, (hopefully, I'll have more by then).

Thanks for doing this.

[s]Hello... My name is Katie, and I'm a newbie~



I would very much want to be reviewed by you. Err, if you wouldn't mind, that is...



Name: The Sun's Frozen Tears
Genre: Fantasy Fiction
Summary: A young boy finds himself at the brink of death and is brought face to face with Death himself as he makes his resolve in having vengeance towards the people who have led him to his Hellish life, but was brought to salvation and bliss by a mysterious child who claims to have 'good eyes'; an ability to witness the supernatural, and helps him through his burden.
Word Count: Roughly 1,340+ words...



Umm... about the plot... It's really kind of, well... crappy in its current state, but it will gradually improve and twist and change according to whatever the mysterious brain thingies in my head would conjure up. The plot I can't really explain in a brief, 24-word sentence (that would be my limit for a short sentence), and the only explanation I can give is because I'm scatterbrained. Heheh~...



I really hope you would review my piece. That would save me a lot of grief later on, you know, from harsh critiques...





Thank you very much~





+Katie+[/s]

I love you? =]

Title: A Jigsaw Heart
Genre: Dramatic Poetry
Link: Here

I know you're extremely good at wording and hidden meanings in poetry, which I epically fail at, so I figured you'd be the best to turn to.

*loves*

[Remember - I read through FREAK in one day for you! All right, all right - I was addicted and wouldn't put it down. But still! ;-]]

~JFW1415

Hallo!! :] I only have one review for my story so it'd be cool if I got another? *poke*

Name: Nourishing a Life

Genre: Suspense

Summary: Girl's sister is shot, killer is unidentified. Girl is witness and sees killer shoot sister. Is the sister dead or alive??? Hmmm... you must read to find out!! *poke* *poke*

Word Count: 1705

Link: topic51278.html

I know I'm being cheesy with the pokes and trying to get you to read the story and all, but I just really want some feedback. My friends all say that it's great, amazing, etc. But they're my friends and they're supposed to say that. Lol.

Hello... I would very much appreciate to have this reviewed...

Name: Words of a Conceited Man
Genre: Dramatic Poetry
Summary: A conceited man tells how another can ever be as proud as himself.
Word Count: Umm... one, two, three... continues to count with fingers I can't recall... but it is very short... :] Only three stanzas long.

Link: topic51820.html


Thank you so much for your time~!


~ KL

Name: Into the Depths
Genre: Action/Adventure, Historical, Romance
Summary: Madeleine Gray, the seventeen year old daughter of a navy soldier, turns pirate when she can't marry the man she loves.
Word Count: 1543 Words
Link: Here

Name: Pretending
Genre: Other Poetry
Link: post597637.html#p597637

Name: Darkness Unpolluted
Genre: Lyric Poetry
Link: topic53061.html

I have gotten some good reviews on this, but I'm hungry for more!

Is a bit under a month still a newbie? (Definitely).

Name: Storm

Genre: Narrative poetry

Link: Here

xD