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You're done, TLG! And I just have to say that I'm loving your story more and more as each chapter is posted. :D


Now accepting more requests.
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I need a proof read from the Prof. =D
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How did I not notice this yesterday? Tsk. I don't do too much on-lining during the weekend - too much housework and stupid tabletop RPGs - but if I do hop on I will do a review for you. If I don't, I will do a review for you on Monday. Fair enough?
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I need help with this!

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Would love help on this.




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I can haz next chapter reviewed, plz? :D
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Um... hi. Please? Btw, is there anything of your's you want reviewed?
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Not just at present. I don't really have anything posted. :|

I'm trying to write things for a couple of contests, and one or two other short projects, so I'll let you know when I need a review. :)
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I am now caught up on reviews. However, if you post a story for me to review, be aware that the entrants in my vampire contest will each be receiving a review on their story, and then the winners will be receiving reviews on other pieces in their portfolio, so it will likely be some time before I am able to get around to reviewing the pieces posted here. I'll also be composing some contest entries, so I'd recommend waiting for another update before requesting a review from me.
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I would love it if you would do this

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P.S.-- I really did do the other half, I don't know why it didn't show up!

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Again, just remember that the reviews in this thread are currently last on my list of priorities. This is not always the case, and I will post again when this changes, but, for now, be aware that you are not likely to receive your requested review for some time.
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Wise, your review is complete. And I'm now open for business again, though, as always, I can't necessarily guarantee a swift response.
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something kind of scavenger

I don't mind if it's not that swift... before the 25th would be nice, as it's for a contest, and it needs lots of help. It's fairly short, though.

Thank you excruciatingly! :D
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This thread has been a bit dead-ish, because I have been lazy. I hereby re-open it.

TLG - I am so sorry I missed your contest deadline! If you still want me to review your piece, please let me know. Please also give me anything else you want me to review so that I can make up for my tardiness!
Frylock, please, no books! I can't read; I'm not a loser!
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I would really appreciate a critique for my new story:
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Thanks!
Matt.




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I'm about to take off for the day, so I'll look at it tomorrow. :)

BTW, love the avi.
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