Ready to Critique

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Ok...I have been working on my critiques (hence my crit disappearance as of late). I am ready to give full, in-depth critiques. So, if you would like your work to be critted, please tell me! I will not critique fanfic or lyrics. I will focus on grammer&&punctuation as well as the three D's: diction, dialogue, and development.

yay?
Alice: If I had a world of my own, everything would be nonsense. Nothing would be what it is because everything would be what it isn't. And contrary-wise; what it is it wouldn't be, and what it wouldn't be, it would. You see?




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I really love your style of writing, so I trust you to be a kick-butt and ruthless critic. :D

I need reviews on anything, really. Click on my portfolio and go nuts, if you wish.
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Sounds great. I'll get right on that.

Anyone else? C'mon guys!
Alice: If I had a world of my own, everything would be nonsense. Nothing would be what it is because everything would be what it isn't. And contrary-wise; what it is it wouldn't be, and what it wouldn't be, it would. You see?




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Goddess Fallen

How about this one? :)

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I was called away for 4th of July, and such, but I'm back, and I'll critique both of your things soon.
Alice: If I had a world of my own, everything would be nonsense. Nothing would be what it is because everything would be what it isn't. And contrary-wise; what it is it wouldn't be, and what it wouldn't be, it would. You see?




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