Please Review My Work

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gamechanger10
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Wed Jun 25, 2008 6:35 pm
gamechanger10 says... · Wed Jun 25, 2008 6:35 pm
so far, i've only posted two things...but i posted both of those to receive insight on them from other writers...

however, i have so far only gotten 1 review out of the 2 posts.

i really need to know how i can improve on either piece!


PLEASE REVIEW MY WRITINGS!!!
"The difference between the right word and almost the right word is the difference between lightning and the lightning bug." -Mark Twain




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Twit
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Wed Jun 25, 2008 7:03 pm
Twit says... · Wed Jun 25, 2008 7:03 pm
Hint: Improve your punctuation, don't use caps for emphasis, and never ever ever post "Please review my work!" in your title.
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Nate
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Wed Jun 25, 2008 7:30 pm
Nate says... · Wed Jun 25, 2008 7:30 pm
Read this:
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Topic is locked. This is not "about an author" and you used all caps, which I had to correct, in your title.

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