**Hey dream, i hope you realize this is gonna be incredibly complex, and it will take a lot of work to keep it going forward, instead of spiraling off into half a dozen pointless side-paths... just a thought, but on to the post, by the way Pie, try putting some kinda of identification on your dialog, its hard to tell who's saying what**
Orsonn:
"Who are you?!" Orson whispers to him, dragging him across the street into the shadow of a tavern. "What do you want?"
"Cool it, I'm on your side." said Ilum
"I don't think so... you look like one of their pets... what do you know about the Rain-Makers?" asks Orsonn
"I know that their experiment are screwing with nature, and that they need to be stopped."
"Meet me tomorrow at the Red Moon Inn" he says quickly, looking around, "Come alone, alone bring whatever information you have."
"When you get to the inn, go to the In-keep, and ask for Dyvin, he'll know what you're looking for."
"But--" asks Ilum
"Tomorrow. Until then, you don't know me," and with that, he seems to fade into the crowd.
