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(Rated R for naughty language and sex references.)

I felt like making a comic, just to amuse myself (I have too much free time). As I don't have any artisitic skills, I decided to [s]rip-off[/s] be inspired by xkcd, and just use stick figures. Awesome. Each comic has its own gag, so there's no continunity or story or anything else like that.

This is what I've done so far (not a lot):


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You know this is very reminiscent of Cyanide & Happiness from [url]Explosm.net[/url], which I go to on occasion for a good laugh. Both of them are as you said, very mature comics, but it's my type of humor and I enjoyed reading them. By no means am I saying that this will appeal to everyone. I particularly enjoyed the Bill Clinton comic, and the second one was just okay for me.

By saying I enjoyed the Bill Clinton comic does not mean I am a Republican.




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:lol:

I like the first one better. I'd suggest making the limbs shorter, and the arms come out lower down.
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I didn't see any nudity. Not that I wanted to see anything, but you said that it was rated "R" because of language and some nudity. Well I guess if you mean by the stick people not having on clothes.

Anyway, back to the comics!

The first one was ok and the second one was not good at all.

I say you should stick to writing stories. They're way better.
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As someone else said, this reminds me of Cyanide and Happiness, the work of Kris Wilson. I liked the second one, thought I preferred the Bill Clinton one. The first one took me a little while to get - mostly because I'm slow, but also because I didn't read the description properly. It was very funny. Nice work :) I do think, though, you should work on the placement of their heads.




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I'm loving them both :-)

The first one's brilliant, I just love the posture of the guy and stand, very funny. Having said that, it's mostly because it's just my type of humour, hehe.

The second is funny too, but I think that the last line is irrelevant, it just seems to dumb it down too much.

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*giggle*

These were interesting. I really like the first one, oh the memories.

The second was funny, but I agree the last line is hindering the effect. I laughed before I rad it. Necro-freak....

I like the sick figure angle, but the setting s a bit bland, you could use a little colour in the background to really make them pop perhaps. Just a thought though.
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Hilarious. I like how they hunch over, throughout the cartoon. My favourite part is when he's at

the podium. It doesn't have any plot, and makes little sense in the real world, but I guess that's the

whole idea.



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haha! these are good, you should make your own site & put them all up like xkcd (which is great btw), I like them both.
Have you ever read "should you be laughing at this?" the comics in that book are pretty similar (and similarly hilarious).

I think you should do more of these =] my sort of sick-twisted humour.




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Necrophilia, it's all the latest rage these days. I say if can beat it, have sex with a dead person.

Like the word mum better than mom.

ever seen those websites for stick figure wars. It's just stick figures killing each other in strange ways but its highly creative and entertaing. Find a site and check it out for yourself.




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Haha it does remind me of Cyanide and Happiness...which is not a bad thing! It's not like haha jokes funny, it's dry humour and that makes me more happy than jokes to be honest.

The first one I'm not too keen on, but I'm not entirely sure why. Maybe it's just been over done and I'm well sick of hearing about clinton/monica etc. Not entirely sure.

The second one I actually like a lot but I have no idea why. The only thing I might change is the last frame where the guy says "you are a blahblah" and maybe change it into like two frame of that guy just standing there, blinking, in silence and then a third frame of him walking away. Maybe? I don't know, I'm not a comist =D

Nice work!

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HA! That was insane! :lol:

Nicely done. Simple, yet strangely hilarious. Now, I don't know what the whole point of the comic was, but I think that the fact that there seems to be no reason for anything in the comic it works. Of course it won't be published anytime soon. :smt021

It was a little too vulgar for my tastes, but then again so is the majority of things out there.
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Sureal, that's hilarious. I'm literally laughing out loud right now. I'm giving this a thumbs-up.

The first one was absolutely perfect, but the second one had a few minor errors.

First, 'depraved' in your last panel should be "deprived". Also, is In the second comic about two different people, or about Bill Clinton? They are together so i'm a bit confused, but maybe you should make it clear if a new story is starting.

Awesome comic. PM me if you need anything, okay?
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