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Derek
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Sun Jun 01, 2008 5:05 pm
Derek says... · Sun Jun 01, 2008 5:05 pm
I need reviews for my newest story
The World Ends.
I like it so far, i've got 5 chapters done
So please review and keep watching for more chapters :D

Its in the fantasy section.
Here is a link.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post ... tml#375926




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myfreindsavamp
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Sun Jun 01, 2008 5:12 pm
myfreindsavamp says... · Sun Jun 01, 2008 5:12 pm
YOu review for me and I'll review for you.

Science fiction
Meeting Future Girl or Mission 'Past'
We've all been broken in some way. It's just how we express it that makes us dffrent form eachother.

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To beautify him only lacks a cover.”
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Lynlyn
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Wed Jun 04, 2008 7:26 pm
Lynlyn says... · Wed Jun 04, 2008 7:26 pm
I reviewed it for ya. :)

If you'd like, you can check out "Song of Shallow Waters" in my portfolio. I'm always looking for reviews of my fiction.
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DreamyAlice
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Wed Mar 29, 2023 8:02 pm
DreamyAlice says... · Wed Mar 29, 2023 8:02 pm
Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries, if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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