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I know this is long but please be willing to read the whole thing.
I kept thinking of the different fairy tales when we were watching Shrek the 3rd in my speech and theater class. So here’s the outcome.
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Almost all the fairy tales show a happy ending right? Well most of the characters that usually went riding off into the sunset got tired of there simple life and they traded it for the human world. They gave it all up to a wizard. His name was Jez. Now all he wanted to do was please the fairy tale hotties and hunks so he granted every wish they asked of him.
Now, us as descendents are coming down to the last straw. Jez the wizard is now dead. The stories of our ancestors have faded and have become nothing but lies. Each ancestor was given a gift. If there gift was suddenly gone they would return to there enchanted borders of there fairy tales.

+Snow White was given seven trinkets in the shape of seven dwarfs. If all were to go missing she or her descendent would return to the fairy tale.

+Rapunzel got to keep her long hair. She was told that her hair was never to be cut or loss it’s length or she or a descendent would return to her fairy tale.

+Sleeping Beauty got to stay awake but if she was to fully return to her sleeping state… well you get the point.

+Author got to relive his glory and if it didn’t go through as said in his stories, you get the point.

+Peter Pan was separated from Tinker bell. If they were ever reunited you get the point.

+Cinderella lost her shoe remeber. If her prince charming finds her and puts that shoe on her then yada, yada, yada.

Now on to characters:

Name:________-Nickname: Snow White
Hair: long, black
Eyes: dark blue
Appearance to everyone else: tomboy that loves the outdoors
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Name:________-Nickname: Sleeping Beauty
Hair: long, mid back length, dirty blond
Eyes: Green
Appearance to everyone else: falls asleep in class
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Name:________-Nickname: Rapunzel
Hair: falls to feet, golden-blond
Eyes: brown
Appearance to everyone else: Boys tend to pull on her hair
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Name:_________-Nickname: Author
Hair: Shaggy, dirty blond
Eyes: Blue
Appearance to everyone else: ?
-Makes a feat to get himself popular
(you have to make up what it is)
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Name: Peter- Nickname: Peter Pan
Hair: Not too short but not too long, borwn
Eyes: Blue
Apperamce to everyone else: Popluar
Fell out of his bunk at camp-how he got his nickname
-Everyone’s chosen that his girlfriend will be called Wendy
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Name:__________-Nickname: Cinderella
Hair: blond
Eyes: blue
Apperance to everyone else: Popular
As cute as a button but she isn't in a little kid kind of way.
*If you want to he can even have an evil stepother*
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Short insert…
Name:___________-Nickname: Hook
Hair: Dark brown
Eyes: Evil grey
-Evil teacher to Peter. He’s always trying his best to ruin Peter’s day but Peter fights back.
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Name:_________-Nickname: Prince charming
Hair: Brown and curly
Eyes: Green
-this is a off side character that should be a kid too.
His grandfather gave him a glass slip and he keeps it in a draw were no one has found it. When he feels it's right he will place it on her foot.
*Sorry but no one can be this one eather because it will posibly hold us up on the story book. I'll be this one too so ya*
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Okay you can only choose one of the fairytale characters but you can have as many classmates as you want and can handle.

Rules:
-regular
-characters: above^
-I’d prefer it if your playing a fairy tale character to play your own gender.
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If you have any additions to the fairy tale list pm me with a short description please.
-Well that’s the longest one I’ve ever written for a story book. Thanks for reading.
Last edited by myfreindsavamp on Mon Jun 02, 2008 7:12 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Pmed by This_is_history:

Yes there can be exceptions but you have to pm and ask if your a boy and want to play a girl's part or what not.

Also, Tinker Bell is off limits just because if some one plays her and I need them to type a quick note and there not there it'll hold up the story book.

I'll probable be narator. So you better tell me when it's the next day and so on.
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Name: Aidan, but everyone calls him Peter or Peter Pan.

Age: 14? (if that's alright?)

Appearance: Medium length (mid-neck) golden brown hair that curls slightly at the ends. Gentle, cornflower blue eyes with dark, almost girlish lashes framing them. About 5' 3", with a suntan. Is very athletic.

History: He was kind of awkward and unpopular up until the summer before 6th grade, when he went to summer camp. He fell out of his bunk on accident, which gave him his nickname. He saw that it was something he could use to his advantage, he embraced it, using it to make others laugh. The kids at school soon realized that he was fun to be around, and he soon became very popular. He has a ton of friends, and one in particular that is slightly more than a friend. All the others kids tease them (playfully of course) about it, and they've nicknamed her 'Wendy'. He's hardly ever called Aidan any more; even his family calls him Peter.
Speaking of his family: he's an only child. His parents divorced when he was eight, and he stays his dad on the weekends and with his mom during the week. He hates it.

Personality: He's very popular at school, because he loves to have fun and make others laugh. He can be sweet when he wants to, and he's very comapssionate and cares a lot about people, though he doesn't like to show it. He likes little kids. He relates to them easily, and he often babysits in the summer and on weekends. All the moms he babysits for think he's the perfect little gentelman, which annoys him to no end.
He likes sports, especially swimming and high-jump. He loves the sensation that he's flying, be it in the air or underwater. He went skydiving and bungee-jumping with his dad once, and they go every summer now.
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Hope this is ok! I think I'm gonna have fun with this. :)
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perfectly okay history
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Name: Whitney but people call her Snow White
Appearance: Extremely fair skin, turquoise eyes, long black hair, extremely pretty (the fairest in the land)
Age: 14
Background: Whit has a lot of pets, loves the outdoors, and is deathly pale hence the name Snow White. She has all guy friends (7 of them) except for her one best friend. Her dad died just after marrying Whit's new stepmom into the family fortune. Whit is an only child, and her stepmom, Grace, is always trying to send her off to boarding school. Whit calls her stepmom 'Cruella'.
Personality: Whit is one of the most popular girls in 9th grade, the male teachers and students like to hit on her, she loves animals, and she's crazy in love with Harry Daniels and has been for 6 years. Is best friends with Aidan (Peter)--is that okay??--and she calls him Pete. She's full of dark humor.

I think you should make one of your characters Cinderella!!!

Do these kids go to the same school????

That's all.

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Okay, good idea. I'll go add into the first post.

Yes the kids go to the same school.

Hey and can you italicise the character you take if you take a main Disney character.
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This is the best idea ever, amber!

Name: Hannah Stillwell

Nickname: Sleeping Beauty

Appearance: long golden brown hair that's in between straight and wavy, amazingly bright green eyes. In a word she is gorgeous and is liked by most guys that aren't already falling over her best friend Whitney (Snow White).

Age: 14

Background: She is really shy but gets along with everyone and she hates no one. She does flirt a bit with boys, especially her best guy friend named Phillip, which she has a huge crush on (he secretly feels the same way too). She always falls asleep in class but teachers don't make a huge deal of it because she is an A student. Hannah loves the outdoors, nature, and animals almost as much as Whitney. She was practically raised in her three aunts' cottage, which is in the heart of the woods. Her parents bicker often and hate each other so when she can't sleep at night from their bickering, she goes to the three aunts' house and sleeps there. That's why she's always sleepy. Her parents really don't notice or care.

Personality: Shy and reserved but still loved by everyone and pretty popular. Boys ask her out all the time and one time a group of them followed her to her house! She is always polite to turn them down, though and the boys don't have hurt feelings. She would never think of hurting anything or anyone.

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Okay I'm probable going to start this tommorow so a, um...
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Open for typings. Haha.... Um.... There you guys go.

I'll play other characters for now.

+This_is_history is playing Peter Pan

+LilyRegan is playing Snow White

+summergirl13 is playing Sleaping Beauty

+All other characters are up for grabs. I'm just keeping them going.


Tinker Bell-=
Her wings skimmed the water as she sped across Neverland's deseted islands. The lost boys are gone. The mermads have left and all the animals have died, leaving the indians to starve. Tink's face is pale as she looks out to the island. She's discusted at the sight nad quickly looks away.

Hook-=
He looked out to his empty class room. it was quuiet and the students weren't here yet. He gave a smile and returned to his work.

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Name: Grandy Jain

Gender: female

Apperance: Sparkling blue eyes that shimmer in the light. Light brown hair that's a bit wavy.

Personality: She loves pirate stories and is very stubun when it comes to things she won't do.

other: ? I have no idea. She sounds like she'd be Peter Pan's girl?
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Hannah

What is that tickling? she thought as she slept in Mrs. Godrick's Algebra class. She woke up to see Phillip next to her tickling her nose with a feather.

"What the--" she started and clapped a hand over her mouth.

"So, I assume you have an answer for me then, Hannah?" Mrs. Godrick said sternly, turning to look at Hannah.

Hannah felt her cheeks burn as the others all turned their attention on her.

"So what's your answer 'Sleeping Beauty'? Don't keep the teacher waiting," Phillip teased, grinning at her.

Hannah narrowed her eyes and glared at him. "I'll get you for this," she whispered.

"Well, Hannah? We're waiting," Mrs. Godrick said, smiling at Hannah's humiliation. She was one of the only teachers that actually hated her.

"Umm, let's see... square root of 8 and minus 4 times 15 makes 64 minus 60 makes 4 so there are two solutions to that problem," Hannah replied.

Mrs. Godrick's gleeful face fell. "That is correct," she sighed, turning back to the board.

Hannah stuck her tongue out at Phillip. "Ha! You know I'm good at math!"

"Fine, you win," he sighed angrily.

She giiggled at the frustrated expression on his face.
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WHITNEY:

I turned my hands over on the desk. Mr. Walters' class always made me want to attack my desk, just to have something to focus on. My stupid pale skin was tingling from being indoors for too long. I still hated high school for not having recess like grade school. I itched to go outside next period--it was gym day. Mr. Walters' cleared his throat.
"Miss Snow?"
I looked up. That was me. "Yes, Mr. Walters?" I used my most diplomatic tone. I heard Jake, one of my best friends, hiccup in the back of the class to cover his laugh.
"Miss Snow, what, I ask you, are you doing to your desk?"
I looked down. "Oh, Mr. Walters," I said, "these desks are so ugly, I figured you wouldn't mind if I added a little artwork to them."
'Artwork' wasn't exactly the best word for it--I had etched Fufu's name in curly lettering with my wood gouge from Tech Ed.
"Who is Fufu?" The question came from Tatia Queens, every girl's personal hypothetical punchbag. Let me clarify: Tatia was anything but a queen. Teasers called her 'ugly', 'pugface', 'fatso', and--uh--other names I cannot use here, as they are quite inappropriate (e.g. bitch)
"Fufu is my parakeet."
Tatia's face was distorted in an expression that didn't really eccentuate her puglike features in a positive manner.
"Ew. You have a parakeet?"
I ignored her and looked back at Jake. He had his eyebrows furrowed in a inquiring way. I shrugged.
Phillip, another one of my friends, had a seat on the other side of Tatia. He leaned over his desk to kick a crumpled up piece of paper to my feet.
I picked it up.
Snow White. Why isn't Hannah in class today? She was in Algebra with Godrick. I should know. Ha. Phillip.
I'd have to ask him about that later. I scribbled my response.
Phil. The freak ditched Science to go sleep at the nurse's office. I swear, her parents are keeping her up with their screaming. She should ditch them. Aren't parents supposed to be the authority figures? Anyhoo, she should be back for lunch. Whit.
I snuck a peek at Harry Daniels, who was seated at the last row in between Jake and Nate Prince, another best friend.
As always, Harry was looking incredibly gorgeous, with his shimmering light brown hair covering his hazel eyes and thick, manly eyebrows.
I sighed. Silently, of course. My crush since forever was still just as perfect as when I'd first laid eyes on him in third grade.
The bell for gym rang, and I was the first to get out of the classroom.
Ah. Fresh air.


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Grandy:
She sat, confussed and bored now. She had nothing to do in Mr. Hook's class. He was always boring. She heared a chair scut and turned. There sat Peter Pan. zCute as to be one of her friends.

Um... I'm gona make a guy too....
Name: James Sterling

Personality: High up on the food chain in school but quite lade back for himself. He doesn't like to be too serious.

Other: He's called many names so you can call him whatever you want. You can have him in what ever you want so ya...*just to help get the story up.*
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Peter
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I grinned as Grandy turned around to look at me. I waved slightly, mouthing the words: 'Hey, cutie'. She blushed and turned around to look back at the teacher.

My best friend, Garret, and my other friend, James, both grinned and snickered from their seats on either side of me.

I gave each of them roguish smile and quickly scribbled a note on a sheet of paper.

Wanna go out saturday, Wendy?

I tapped Grandy on the shoulder and handed it to her quickly so the teacher wouldn't see.
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Sorry, it's really short. It was all I could do at the moment, I'll do a longer one later. Hmm, are Snow White and Sleeping Beauty in the same 'popular' group as Peter is? Or should we make them in two seperate groups. Rivalry's always fun! :) lol. Amber, do you wanna make a DT for this, so we won't be discussing stuff here too much?
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Grandy:
She looked at it and watched him carfully to make sure he wasn't playing a prank on her. His smile was sincere. She scribled a curly-cursize answer.

Sure, I have nothing better to do anyways.

She gave a playful smile as he looked back at her.

^^^^

Ya, one minute and I'll get one up.
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WHITNEY

I watched Pete flirt with Grandy Jain. It made me want to puke. I hated how other girls--even Hannah--flirted with guys. It made me sick. It wasn't like I was homosexual or anything, but guys didn't really instill a passion for flirting in me. I watched and drooled--and kicked their butts in every sport imaginable. Though I looked like a preppy wuss, I was far from being one.
I looked at them, unconsiously imagining Harry and I in that situation. I blushed for Grandy, and looked back at Hannah. She had come back half way through lunch hour, looking confused and totally unrefreshed.
Hannah was staring across Peter's back at Phillip. I rolled my eyes.
Harry Daniels, who sat in front of me, turned around.
"Hey, Snow." I shrieked internally. He smiled, revealing perfect teeth, and a peppermint.
"What's up?" I kicked myself. I was such a dork.
Harry looked relieved that I was talking to him. Generally, I lost my cool in his presence.
"Do you have plans on Saturday night?"
I just about fainted. "No."
"Maybe we could go out. You know, the movies or something...?" He looked nervous and unsure.
"Totally," I said, trying to be the bold one. "That sounds awesome."
Could this be happening? Harry Daniels? Whoa.
"Sweet. See you then, Snow." He grinned.


Peter and Snow White and Sleeping Beauty are friends, I think....

~Lily~
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