Mirror Mirror

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Hello!

Firstly, I want to make it clear that I don't know much about poetry. I'll try to do my best, though, and I hope it's helpful.

Quote:
Why my eyes you always fool?
Because it's a question, the word "do" needs to be there somewhere... maybe: "Why my eyes do you always fool?"

Quote:
When anas sucked the life from me
I think this should be "ana's" because you're saying "ana has," aren't you? That brings me to my next point:

Who is ana, and why isn't her name capitalized? Is she supposed to represent anorexia? I don't really understand. It may just be me being dumb, but I think you should clarify her.

Other than than, interesting poem for sure! The rhyme works well and the rhythm is consistent and easy to read.

Hope this helps somewhat.



You are beautiful because you let yourself feel, and that is a brave thing indeed.
— Shinji Moon