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(Cool. Help is always needed no matter who you are. This also lets me create a character I really love.)

Name- Anthony Delia (Tony)

Age- 15

Appearance- About 5'10 in hight and wieghs about 175 pounds, alittle chubby but well rounded. He has Dark brown hair that is thick and shaggy, has blue-green eyes, and and a scar upon his right eyebrow. He usually wears plain clothing and loves to wear pants or jeans as long as it's not too hot. Never wears a long sleeve shirt. He has a calm look about him, but doesn't smile a lot.

Personality- He seems to be torn. He likes to be active and silly with his friends having a good time, but deep down he knows he's really a serious person. He's very understanding when it comes to other peoples problems, but has the tendancy to over react. At other times he seems depressed due to events in his life. He always feels everyone else's problems are on him and he must do something over whelming him.

History- He lives in a rural area near a small town. He has two younger sisters. At age 12 he was dignost with dpression and has been on medication ever since. He has just started highschool and has plenty of fiends. He has tried to commite suicide 5 times. He has an uncle in the airforce and worries he may never see him again. His aunt was an alcoholic thanks a different uncle who abusted her. She nearly died, but went back to him not even a year ago and has wondered why she left and to wear.
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Name: Richard Mason
Age: 32
Height/Weight: 5'8"/160lbs.
Hair/Eyes: Black Crew Cut/Steely Blue
Ethnicity: Prussian
Personality: Speaks softly and slowly, an intentional speech pattern that quickly leads his enemies to believe him simple minded, or slow in the head. His composure is nigh unbreakable; and even in the thick of a firefight/melee he is calm and collected.
History: Raised in a large metropolis among thieves and murderers. Holds few morals himself, though he is not a cruel man. He does what benefits him, no more or less. He began taking contracts at a young age, and proved very successful. He has gathered a sort of infamy amongst the underworld.
Appearance: Dressed in typical clothing of the 18th century, albeit wearing a greatcoat. Carries three pistols at any given time; two tucked the small of his back, and one in plain view on his belt. A Prussian Hunting Sword hangs at his side. Often wears a mask of varying styles while on task.
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Name: Dawn Flynn

Age: 12

Appearance: about 5'3" tall, slim, pretty
Eyes (ignore all else)
Hair length and color (ignore all else and no bangs)
General appearance (ignore writing)

Personality: very smart (she's in tenth grade), gets teased for it a lot. She is typically shy but can be feisty when cornered or degraded. She easily talks with friends when she makes good ones. That usually doesn't happen because people are jealous of her. People who actually talk to her with good intentions find her understanding and caring. She gives good advice and is quite willing to offer help if people really want it. She can also defend herself ably against several bullies at once. Roman Catholic (in case things needing morals come up, she holds my beliefs, which are probably different from most people's). She is usually calm, rarely cries an d doesn't lose composure easily.

History: born out of wedlock to a 13-year old, she was adopted at birth and has never met her real parents, although she hopes to one day. Has been to many schools, switching when she can't take the abuse anymore. Has a lovely singing voice and is obsessed with music. Hopes to be a singer or music teacher when she grows up. Also likes to write.
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Name: Jaik (Pronounced Jack) Connors

Age: 25

Race: Human

Gender: Male

Appearance: Jaik has sandy-brown hair, dark blue eyes, and is abnormally thin. He isn't very muscular and his skin is lightly tanned. He stands about 6' and weighs, roughly, 150 lbs. His clothes are normally darker in color and cover as much skin as possible.

Personality: Jaik is talented in the art of speech-craft. He has a quick mind and a sharp tongue. He's good at getting people to see things from his perspective. He has a knack for staying out of trouble and doesn't like to draw much attention to himself. He doesn't trust easily, but is loyal to those he does.

History: Jaik's life has been painfully normal so far. He wishes for adventure and will seize any opportunity that comes his way. He has taken the job of an artist, and though it doesn't pay well and he's not a master at it, he enjoys himself.
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this looks cool. i think ill join.


Name: Richard Defonte

Age: 17

Height: 5'4"
Weight: 210

Appearance: fairly short, with a sturdy face, not bad looking, but is kinda... fat. is muscular, but not really strong.

History: Long inured to being alone, he has been shunned for his entire life, for being fat, for being smart, a reader. and for knowing things that he shouldnt be able to know. he can read minds, as well as move thing with his mind. (Telekinesis & Telepathy)

Personality: A loner, doenst like most people, and can be anti-social he has a deap-seated hatred for the "establishment" and "society"

other: doesnt like people. has next to no friends


**whatever... so what IS the plot to this story, it seems to be kinda random to me... ?**
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The plot will become known in due time. By tonight I will have allocated you each a part in a storybook and you will be able to add to your bios and start posting.
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Here are the current groups and brief summaries of each plot. I'll not create the new threads until tomorrow so there's still time to join and if you really don't like the plot I've given you, you can request a transfer, preferably in the discussion thread or by pm stating the reason.

1:
BigBadBear
Loveablelittlesock
SuicideKing
Jasmine Hart
Dr. Jamie Bondage

Plot: A historical fiction set in a rustic area ruled over by a count and countess. Richard Mason is contacted by his network of thieves and murderers and assigned the task of kidnapping Amber, the count's daughter and holding her hostage. A young boy, Alan Stockton, hears word of this across the street and intends to inform the count and his family but will he be successful or will he too be kidnapped? That all depends on Raine Moran, an associate of Richard's who has the choice of either helping the two children or siding with her employer in the hope that he will help her discover the whereabouts of her missing mother. Waiting at the docks is Aren and the ship he sails under, collecting cargo for their next voyage. few other than the captain know of the next journey's true purpose: to take aboard both Richard and his hostage and carry them safely out of reach of the count until a bargain can be struck.

Very sketchy at the moment but feel free to adapt your bios around the plot.

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This_is_history
piepiemann22
New writer
AmberAngst
Ghostwriter

plot: This one features around a thrice weekly social group for trouble teens. On Monday, Wednesday and Friday the group meet at six in the afternoon, sometimes to talk about their problems, sometimes to play sport and sometimes to seek help for their school work or family troubles. The group is open to all students but particularly those who have troubled pasts. Each of your characters is a member of this group. You can like the social workers or you can hate them, you can enjoy the meetings or hate them, you can even skip a few but the group will be the main focus. That's not to say that the characters can't see each other at school or even start relationships and go to the cinema etc.

This plot is very simple currently but will be built on as the characters develop.

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Bella
Maki-Chan
God
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Layleun

plot: A fantasy/ adventure storybook. For centuries, the village of Ameron was protected by a magical barrier that kept the thriving evils of the world out and while the rest of the planet rotted and decayed, Ameron flourished. Over time, the barrier grew weak and now it is held by a mere thread, still preventing any from entering but it is possible to leave Ameron. Those outside lurk just beyong the power of the barrier; they have waited for this day when they can claim revenge on those who shut themselves away and refused to give help. The leader of Ameron has decided to send a group of people outside the barrier to seek out the mage Syrias amongst the rotten lands. It was he who erected the original barrier and the people of Ameron hope that he will see fit to repair it for them. The journey will be dangerous and long and time moves strangely in the rotten lands so that months can pass in days. Therefore, Ameron is sending her youngest warriors, your characters, on the mission.

Occasionally I will post saying that so many months have been skipped. Your characters will not necessarily mature mentally but their bodies and powers will become physically stronger each time until they reach the point where they are growing old, at which time, their strength and powers will diminish again. The characters hope that the mage will restore their youth once he is located.

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This has been edited to better fit the plot.

Name: Minerva Rivers

Age: 22

Appearance: Long red brown hair that falls to the middle of her back. Short and lithe limbed with angular features and soft amber eys. She prefers to wear red most of the time.

Personality: Blaze about most things. She's not really selfcentered, but the things she loves take top priority, and the things she hates matter little to her. She tends to be very relaxed and sociable, although she doesn't have a high opinion of other people in general. Very passionate about the arts, particulary music and liturature.

History: Both of Minerva's parents wer mucisians travelling form court to court. They were seperated as often as not, but Minerva saw an equal share of both of them and learned music at their knee. She loves her musical life, but she's tired of the travalling. She want's to settle down, but the only way she can do that without disapointing her parent's is to set out on her own.

Other: Up for love.
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Leah - Certainly not too late. i think I'll place you in group one.
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Love the plot you put me in Kit. Looking forward to getting started. :)
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I have one question. WHen you say "Historical fiction" what period does that imply? Victorian or older? I'm good with anything, but it's kind of important.




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**so. my plot-line sounds kool... this is an interesting idea. cant wait to start **
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Oh!! I love my plot! I can't wait for this to start!
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My profile is up. Thanks again, Kitty. Sorry it's so late. :)
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Do I need to add anything to my profile? And when can we start?
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